Magnetic Beauty

By Wiccad

You are so bright and beautiful this night
Your light caresses everything in it's warmth
You bring in the tides on some distant shores
You stand alone amongst  the stars
For everyone to adore

Your luminescence is powerful and misunderstood
Your studious ways bring out the crazies they say
Surrounded by darkness and stll you shine
I want to keep you......and forever to be mine

I struggle to find the right words it seems
To describe your beauty, and to be heard
My darkness seems to swallow my light
I wish I were like you, and would always be bright

Even when you are just  a sliver
Your light..... it goes on forever
Mesmerizing all who gaze upon you
You are a God to some, depending on their view

But tonight,  you are my muse
And as I write this down, I feel a bit confused
Your battle with the darkness.........do you ever think you'll lose?
Like us humans with all of our faults......
And how our darkness cloaks our inner thoughts.

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Copyright 2010 Wiccad
Published on Monday, May 10, 2010.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • Miztaken4beauty On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176)By person wrote:

    I love this piece. Its so sweet and longing. And the subject, ethereal.

  • Malcholm Dark On Monday, May 10, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    But tonight, you are my muse... nicely written W, a very good read... your emotional context was perfect, thanks

  • Morgoth On Monday, May 10, 2010, Morgoth (36)By person wrote:

    I like the imagery here, a good work!

  • HeadpatSlut On Monday, May 10, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    Ah, a refreshing read for the first in the morning, very nice indeed, I couldn't help but feel a nice air of Poe mixed in with that of Frost, very good indeed. Thanks for the amazing write, keep up the good work. Scholar

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