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Magnetic Beauty
By Wiccad
You are so bright and beautiful this night
Your light caresses everything
in it's warmth
You bring in the tides on some distant shores
You
stand alone amongst the stars
For everyone to adore
Your
luminescence is powerful and misunderstood
Your studious ways bring
out the crazies they say
Surrounded by darkness and stll you shine
I want to keep you......and forever to be mine
I struggle
to find the right words it seems
To describe your beauty, and to be
heard
My darkness seems to swallow my light
I wish I were like
you, and would always be bright
Even when you are just a sliver
Your light..... it goes on forever
Mesmerizing all who gaze upon
you
You are a God to some, depending on their view
But
tonight, you are my muse
And as I write this down, I feel a bit
confused
Your battle with the darkness.........do you ever think you'll
lose?
Like us humans with all of our faults......
And how our darkness
cloaks our inner thoughts.
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Copyright 2010 Wiccad
Comments on "Magnetic Beauty"
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177)
wrote:
I love this piece. Its so sweet and longing. And the subject, ethereal.
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On Monday, May 10, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
But tonight, you are my muse... nicely written W, a very good read... your emotional context was perfect, thanks
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On Monday, May 10, 2010, Morgoth
(36) wrote:
I like the imagery here, a good work!
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On Monday, May 10, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
Ah, a refreshing read for the first in the morning, very nice indeed, I couldn't help but feel a nice air of Poe mixed in with that of Frost, very good indeed. Thanks for the amazing write, keep up the good work.
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