Snow Angels and Bloodstains

By soldier

you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your blood

love - your lips start to grow cold
love - I rip your insides out
love - I feast on your dead flesh
I can't love you anymore

you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your blood

like a snow flake
you came and stuck
then I saw the light
and you melted

there is no snow in hell

you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your blood

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Published on Wednesday, February 24, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

death metal song I wrote

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Comments on "Snow Angels and Bloodstains"

On Tuesday, May 25, 2010, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

Twisted. Morbid. Brutal. I approve! :)
On Tuesday, May 18, 2010, GraveFlower (240) wrote:

dude. thats brutal....you must have had a lot of hatred for this bitch......
On Saturday, March 27, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257) wrote:

Hmm, very nice, it sounds like it would make a nice Metal song, I give this a TEN, thanks for the write.
On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806) wrote:

YOU ARE TWISTED. Thank-you for a finely written piece, I am impressed. write on.
On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, RubyXero (481) wrote:

yeah...i'll have to check out that link. That was awesome. short, sweet, and definitely stuck...bloodstuck on me. Loved it!
On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860) wrote:

This would make an awesome death metal song, I can actually hear music when I read it too. Great write.
On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, soldier (22) wrote:

go here http://www.myspace.com/endofnovembermetal and you'll be able to hear the actual music
On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860) wrote:

Listened to the music, that's some badass death metal.