In My Eyes
By Rowan
Stars pass over us as we lay side by side.
I turn to you and see love
in your eyes,
the passion that I have searched to find.
It all
lies there shining through your eyes.
You whisper make a wish
as shooting stars pass by,
but my wishes have already been granted,
why?
Do I deserve someone like you by my side,
someone like you
with love in their eyes?
Since I lived being told so many lies,
can I trust this person by my side?
If I am hurt again I know I may
cry,
into the shoulder of this man by my side.
You hold
me close as I stare into your eyes,
I fear what's to come, the end
may draw nigh.
I hold you close, keeping what is mine,
my beloved,
the one by my side.
Make a wish I say as a star passes by.
You make your wish to stay by my side.
How much do you love me,
you ask almost shy.
Count the stars and times it by the love in my
eyes.
Comments on "In My Eyes"
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
This brought a huge smile on to my face :) It was beautiful..it sucked me right in..into this scene..I could sit behind your eyes and believe. And the last line..just sunk my heart in that warm butterfly kind of way. Amazing, Rowan.
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A former member wrote:
This gave me that warm fuzzy feeling i don't get too often from reading. Thank you for reminding me what it feels like, haha.
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
WELL WRITTEN. The last was a perfect end to great read. thanks.
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A former member wrote:
ah rowan you know how much i dislike goshy moshy stuff but some how you made me love this, how weird:D
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
ok you got me, i smiled too. simple yet elegant.
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Awwww that was so beautiful!! The final line made me smile SO big and gave me a little chill. Refreshing to see love played out like this. Was able to visualize the whole scene since you wrote it so well =)
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
hehe thanks. I wanted to write something beautiful. Glad you liked it. :)