Obscure

By ANGELSLAYER

The moon drips on my face
I lay tranquil in darkness
Lost in my emptiness
I sigh with the loss of everything that ever meant anything

I rise from my slumber
Plucking fruit from the tree
It withers beneath my touch

I've slept too long with the loss of you
I missed the taint created in the void
I miss my soul buried at my feet

Looking at the world through vacant eyes
Colors bled dry
Bleak shades of grey
I miss the signs of life

The winds whisper insanities in my ear
But the madness already fills my head


Snow falls upon the surface of the lake in which I wait
Bathed in onyx waters
Reflecting obscenities born inside my heart

Mists rise up to obscure lost humanity
I am a beautiful, empty ruin

I found my angel here
Midnight entered my soul with her deceit
I still feel her annnointed claws deep in my flesh
My skin still bears the burns of her self-righteous tongue

My scars gleam silver with the touch of moonlight
Showing me the reality I hide from myself
Now it's so clear
The flaws I tried to deny

And I stumble through the snowfall
Tears fall as the stars shine

Clinging to my bitterness
I keep grasping hope


Which slips through my fingers like blood

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Copyright 2009 ANGELSLAYER
Published on Friday, October 16, 2009.     Filed under:
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  • Devilish On Sunday, June 26, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I missed the taint created in the void... Reflecting obscenities born inside my heart... i am a beautiful empty ruin... mmmmmm... Fuckin Love It! Scholar

  • XOCHITL On Saturday, January 15, 2011, XOCHITL (40)By person wrote:

    Beautiful piece.

  • urbanhumility On Monday, March 15, 2010, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    truly felt.....well done...........urban

  • Ashteroth On Wednesday, February 10, 2010, Ashteroth (190)By person wrote:

    You painted this picture well with ur words to produce a great read..well done ~Ash

  • A former member wrote: Painfully pretty. Thanks for sharing. *Alice*

  • Dilated View On Tuesday, January 12, 2010, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Like an unexpected punch to the gut that leaves you wondering what just happened. Crushing, dripping with pain. A very painful landscape but you painted it well. Nicely done.

  • A former member wrote: Georgeously beautiful ,thanks for the read .peace

  • A former member wrote: This says so much, hard to comment on just one thing. Love it.

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, October 29, 2009, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    I am moved by every choice of your words.....eloquent and articulate in such sterile despair...................well done..............urban

  • Riven Waker On Wednesday, October 28, 2009, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    relentlessly beautiful, each stanza dripping with perfection

  • blue On Friday, October 23, 2009, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Such poems of despair tend to take the same paths; too well known it would seem, but this particular line opened a different door here for me, an eloquent phrase of the ultimately consequential contradiction: "I am a beautiful, empty ruin" This one line says it all and more. ~b

  • A former member wrote: Words of poisonous beauty, just what I needed.

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