Saved (pt. 1)
By jajang829
She walks across the room
Dragging her hatred like a veil
Rage pulsing thru her veins
Bringing in a world of doom
A moment passes thru her eyes and all is well
Only she knows the troubles he can bring
Though her heart surely tries to scream
Wallowing in the depths of hell
She hangs on with all her might
Afraid to be freed from her past of pain
While raging against the bonds that keep her
And the darkness which obscures her sight
An angel disguised demon bound her here
Once trapped she saw the evil unveiled
Tearing her apart from the inside he began
Binding her stronger thru fear
He tore her down to the heart
Stamping in self-hatred and loathing
She tried to fight his ways till she bled
Giving love to a soul that was harsh
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The demon slipped away one night
Running in fear of her righteousness and beauty
Even still keeping control within reach
As the darkness crept in compounding her plight
She fought the fear screaming out for help
His attacks from the dark almost keeping her down
Lashing back she attacked with her own pain
Feeling the sting he pushed back and she let out a yelp
Down and beaten she tried to breathe
Praying vehemently to her God
Begging for a reprieve that she couldn’t accept
Tentacles of the beast around her seethed
Out of the darkness a savior called out
Not even realizing what his role would be
He is a ghost from the past before her darkness
Seeking with ears that heard her shout
The savior’s strength was true and his heart was ready
He found her lying in the darkness
Hiding in the comfort of the pain she knows
He stood her up weak but steady
With the light he brought he could see
A beauty inside her greater than all the world
One he remembered drawing him here
He promised all she wants shall be
He untied the binds and unlocked her heart
A glorious light shown out of her
Bringing with it a joy to all around
Awakening her soul with a start
She told him of the beast that is near
Cried to him the horrors she had endured
He pulled her close as she shuddered
Holding her tighter as the beast let out a sneer
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(Continued in part 2)
Comments on "Saved (pt. 1)"
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A former member wrote:
dragging her hatred like a veil. Intriguing descriptions. :)
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A former member wrote:
wow,,,so much to take in. So much sadness. Powerful!
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On Friday, October 16, 2009, Cherry Bear
(25) wrote:
Wow, beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful, I loved every drop of this one and am eager to read the sequel.
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On Sunday, October 4, 2009, Everlasting Gobstopper
(18) wrote:
this poem is very gripping like a short story I like how it just draws me in to the abyss. I can't wait to read part to!