Forbidden

By Blood Saga

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 You best be careful now
it's only innocent the first time.
And it's better you learn it
before all the petals whither.


But that's not how it works, now is it?


   You'll see
it was a mistake. . .

even if you don't realize it yet.


.. . ...
        
         . . ... .

You better start praying
     to the god that holds up the world.
Because you're not the only one who suffers
 when the threads of Fate
are stained with mortal blood.



So we think we'll be happy
  counting each petal
         until the last one falls


     (...he loves you not...)

                     You can't avoid the thorns.


Lest calm seas
                      lead to colder winters...


Mother Earth mourns tonight.

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 .

   . . .

So lets call it a eulogy.
  You were a little more alive
and in a way,
                      I was in love then...


But it's only innocent the first time.

 

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Copyright 2009 Blood Saga
Published on Sunday, September 13, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Astonishing and Creative! And I Appreciate your Commendation on my work! Thank You!

  • A former member wrote: Love it. Forbidden love is the hardest to deny.... boy do I know it. =)

  • Deaths Apostle On Thursday, October 1, 2009, Deaths Apostle (65)By person wrote:

    Beautiful... I felt a piece of my heart crumble as I read it

  • Ashteroth On Monday, September 21, 2009, Ashteroth (190)By person wrote:

    Hmm... quite interesting as is the writing on ur home page I must say. I think I will come back and read more of ur stuff ~Ash

  • A former member wrote: *amazed* i cant think of anything to say.....*awed to pieces*~moony

  • A former member wrote: this crawled under my skin in all the right places...melancholy with the bitter-sweetness of just desserts served up cold.

  • urbanhumility On Sunday, September 13, 2009, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    brilliant......truly felt

  • AniDayz On Sunday, September 13, 2009, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    lovein' on the first part of this piece, and how itall bleeds together. well.woven.

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