Forbidden
By Blood Saga
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You best be careful now
it's only innocent the first
time.
And it's better you learn it
before all the petals whither.
But that's not how it works, now is it?
You'll see
it was a mistake. . .
even if you
don't realize it yet.
.. . ...
. . ... .
You better start praying
to the god that holds up the world.
Because you're not
the only one who suffers
when the threads of Fate
are stained
with mortal blood.
So we think we'll be happy
counting each petal
until the last one falls
(...he loves you not...)
You can't avoid the thorns.
Lest calm seas
lead to colder winters...
Mother Earth mourns tonight.
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So lets call it a eulogy.
You were a little more alive
and
in a way,
I was in love
then...
But it's only innocent the first time.
Comments on "Forbidden"
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A former member wrote:
Astonishing and Creative!
And I Appreciate your Commendation on my work!
Thank You!
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A former member wrote:
Love it. Forbidden love is the hardest to deny.... boy do I know it. =)
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On Thursday, October 1, 2009, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
Beautiful... I felt a piece of my heart crumble as I read it
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On Monday, September 21, 2009, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
Hmm... quite interesting as is the writing on ur home page I must say. I think I will come back and read more of ur stuff ~Ash
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A former member wrote:
*amazed* i cant think of anything to say.....*awed to pieces*~moony
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A former member wrote:
this crawled under my skin in all the right places...melancholy with the bitter-sweetness of just desserts served up cold.
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On Sunday, September 13, 2009, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
brilliant......truly felt
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On Sunday, September 13, 2009, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
lovein' on the first part of this piece, and how itall bleeds together. well.woven.