Words of Wisdom
By Blood Saga
Give me
a dandelion's wing
and I'll find
a more perfect
. . .paradise
than the one you've built
for me.
It can take from you
until you can't
breathe anymore.
You can't cry,
you can't scream
with
pleasure
[you've never felt more like living]
when It rips you to pieces. . .
bite your tongue.
L
O
V
E
is not a matter
of the heart
alone. . .
Look within yourself
and decide how you
would rather
be
Broken.
Because
soon
you're drowning in it.
-swim-
No time now. . .
[you've never felt more at peace]
-deep breath-
. ... .
.
At very least
admit you're still sinking.
. . .Or open your eyes
and take a good look.
Because you can't spell
L
O
V
E
without. . .
C
L
I
C
H
E
And. . .
. ... . .
[you've
never felt more like dying]
Comments on "Words of Wisdom"
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A former member wrote:
for me, this reaffirmed the usefulness of all language is found in it's ability to be completely and utterly ubiquitous..... the originality is not in the spelling, but in the voice that speaks it..... maybe. love the post, hopeless as it may be.
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A former member wrote:
"decide how you would rather be broken."~ i would rather not be..............devastating poem. with a devastating message.
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On Tuesday, November 10, 2009, blue
(1409) wrote:
Chilling, how you are able to incite blood-remembering within me. Suspect even. mmm tricky. ~b
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On Saturday, August 1, 2009, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
i love the structure of this. and the slow rhythm and beat. its lovely and its relatable. =] very good write.
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On Saturday, August 1, 2009, blue
(1409) wrote:
heh. I am digging your words, very much so. ~b
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On Saturday, August 1, 2009, Blood Saga
(78) wrote:
Thank you very much, blue. :)
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On Friday, July 31, 2009, Believer
(48) wrote:
i liked the beginning the best. it's what caught my attention.
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A former member wrote:
Thank you for the read , very lovely ,i enjoyed this piece. flows vividly thanks again:)