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neap tide
By lovechild
ssso yyour mystery is undderstood and all of the codes hhave been unlocked
thinking bigger like the whaales is futile noww thaat we haave
talkede
with mirthful menaace my devine exxistence luminescess over yours and
seeks to hide the light in bushels of seashells collected on
other ssshores
farrr away and yess in contraast66 art aaand melancholy mixed create
a cossmic reaaffirmaation wwithh whicch our futuuree comes affixed
(c) 2009
BEAUTIFULLY BROKEN tm productions`
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© 2009 lovechild
Published on Saturday, January 24, 2009.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2009, lovechild
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wrote:
yes i did mean to post this as is- it began as a lot of typos on a bad keyboard but i can't stand it any other way now! lovechild
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On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
I tend to agree with A/H here, are you going for a ghost light voice which slightly echos or something cuz I can't see it's relevance otherwise. However I don't mind the piece itself.
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A former member wrote:
id like to make a comment but i cant get past the grammer,...unless it was a purpose thing,go to the 5th icon to the left[compose new works] open your poem up ... rectify/resubmit
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On Thursday, January 29, 2009, Jonas
(715) wrote:
you need to get back to your roots sir and eat some e.e.cummingsforbreakfastlunchanddinner ... i too was thrown off initially, however, i quickly fell in love with the mechanic as i let myself feel the way the words were spelled accepting stutters and delays as the natural reaction that the symbols would take. *** lovechild gets my vote for raddest superbaddest poet of the day for this poem.
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