Bedroom Eyes

By freudian-slip

You're gasping for air again
simple man
not quite content with simple pleasure

thoughts wrapped around pain
might soon offer you pleasure

for it wasn't the click of her heels
or the sweet scented air that followed her
nor words of adoration
however lovely they appeared falling out of her mouth

it was the concept of complete annihilation of her spirit
not merely giving in

but giving up

weak at the knees
making your pants tighter than the noose around your brain
waiting only for the look of complete humiliation

tongue tied submission
makes you rise to the occasion

who could question a love such as this?

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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Sunday, October 26, 2008.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • The Lipstick Factor On Sunday, October 26, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (287)By person wrote:

    Hmm--very, very interesting...I like...the second stanza has stayed with me...

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