A Tribute To My Muse - Sonnet 3

By Delphoid-Q

How shall I best convey your being?
You, the spring of all of my creation;
From your eye streams all of my poetic seeing
Yet my truest art stands as but an imitation.

I feel my limitations with searing touch
And feel unworthy of but the merest glance;
For being unable to describe you as such
Is like being ridden through with a lance.

Tell me, fair creature, how to capture you in verse
And I shall take up pen and be enthralled;
Let me but in your presence myself immerse
And the inspiration you grant shall forever be recalled.

For I look on you as my all-inspiring muse,
For allowing your essence with these lines of mine to fuse.

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Copyright 2003 Delphoid-Q
Published on Sunday, May 11, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • JiNx On Sunday, November 21, 2004, JiNx (100)By person wrote:

    Nice, Beautifully writen.. I wonder if I have a muse.... -JiNx(ie)

  • aXe FactoR On Sunday, May 23, 2004, aXe FactoR (342)By person wrote:

    i have to tell you this. your style of writing is one of the few that amazes me on this site. i look forward to reading more of your works. your great. :)

  • flying_fox On Friday, April 16, 2004, flying_fox (596)By person wrote:

    wonderful structure...lovely originality with a touch of tradition. Oh to be the person that inspires such words!

  • A former member wrote: Oh wow...that is truly beautiful. I wish I could write Sonnets but I fear I get lost in the structure of them. Excellent work.

  • KittyStryker On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, KittyStryker (736)By person wrote:

    beautifully done... your muse is quite lucky. :)

  • Delphoid-Q On Thursday, August 28, 2003, Delphoid-Q (217)By person wrote:

    If only she thought so...

  • KittyStryker On Friday, November 21, 2003, KittyStryker (736)By person wrote:

    i never said on here... but... i think she's a fool for not seeing what a lovely fabulous person you are. ::hug:: and... can i be the girl floating on the ocean in your pic? pretty please? i wanna be naked and protected by dragons!

  • Delphoid-Q On Friday, November 21, 2003, Delphoid-Q (217)By person wrote:

    Thank you darling *kisses*� I really appreciate that. Kitty, you ARE the girl in the picture. She reminds me of you in many ways: powerful and commanding yet vulnerable and fragile at the same time� Plus, the naked bit helps too ;)

  • KittyStryker On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, KittyStryker (736)By person wrote:

    awwww ::blush and kisses:: you flatter me so!

  • A former member wrote: A lovely write. Uplifting and lighthearted. Beautiful. a_o_h

  • Loneal On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    A beautiful work to reflect a beautiful mind. Joyous intoxication and frustration at being unable to properly share the feeling with others. Many thanks for gracing the world with your words ... =)

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, June 5, 2003, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    Wow!... can I have your muse please??? This is such a talented peice....it was like sugar candy for the left himsphere...ooo...wonderful.~DW~

  • A former member wrote: "Is like being ridden through with a lance," ouch. This is a splendid poem, w/ a Shakspearean feel. Well done.

  • DoctorAsh On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, DoctorAsh (389)By person wrote:

    Now .. how can one grow tired of the structure of a wording configuration. Every piece is a song .. transperant this sonnet must be in this modern world of diverse poetry, i am ignorant to the style ... Whatever you say, this was very well done

  • diavolessa On Sunday, May 11, 2003, diavolessa (225)By person wrote:

    well I loved this one, so i don't think it would tire me to read some more of your sonnets!

  • Aurora_Light On Sunday, May 11, 2003, Aurora_Light (482)By person wrote:

    wow i like this a lot

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