Morning Rain

By freudian-slip

humming a tune
aloud
into the shower
patchouli scented soap
runs down
to the thumbprints
left
inside
thighs
he held up
high enough
to meet the taste of his mouth
promises of tonight
pulse inside
fingers run through
pull-tired
wet silken hair
beads of heated water
decorate
olive skin
missing him
and it's only morning

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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Sunday, October 5, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Friday, October 10, 2008, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    beautifully done.

  • Leith Plunkett On Sunday, October 5, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    (runs down to the thumbprints left inside thighs) I like how grafic these words are without actually saying it. very powerful poetry for the mind to toy with

  • elisa On Sunday, October 5, 2008, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    impeccable insight... nicely done.

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