.....

By BrokenAngel

.surrender.
,give up,
-offer yourself-

.cannot escape.
,no way out,
-just relax-

.float away.
,drift on a breeze,
-caress the clouds-

.away away.
,beyond the possible,
-heaven?-

.forever.
,belonging to everything,
-but nothing at all-

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© 2008 BrokenAngel
Published on Wednesday, September 10, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • thelostmessenger On Wednesday, September 10, 2008, thelostmessenger (110)By person wrote:

    oooh. beautiful. i share a similar style... these people know what they're talking about, this was truely mesmerizing.

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, September 10, 2008, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Mesmeric..Welcome to DP :) -Carl

  • Moonflower On Wednesday, September 10, 2008, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    this was relaxing ;)

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