By Bloodofdeadpoets

There is increasing pressure on my brain but I try to maintain
It is ever so hard because I’m spitting up blood again
People yelling at me breath damn it your dying
Looking at them through hollow eyes I want to yell im trying
My body is convulsing now so hard that my bones are breaking
More and more people pin me down but they cant stop the shaking
Reaching out to loved ones their wrist my hands are grasping
Tears roll down my face as I lay there my lungs still gasping
More and more tears fall quickly down my pale face
My chest ponding harder as my heart quickens its pace
Looking at all my loved ones I release my final sigh
Letting my head fall back I give in and finally die

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© 2008 Bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Wednesday, July 23, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Moonflower On Monday, July 27, 2009, Moonflower (309)By person wrote:

    damn....excellent writing. =]

  • A former member wrote: Made me squirm uncomfortably in my chair, well done.

  • denver nitze On Wednesday, July 23, 2008, denver nitze (257)By person wrote:

    so close to home you hit with this one. ouch. ~ta~

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