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Man in the long black Cloak
By BlacK_diamond_Bay
When a sadist, has his sorrow to look forward to.
And when a priest has got his easy money comin.
So does a millionaire has his millions at his feet,
And the dog’s got his bone waitin for him.
The cat, has nine lives
And the leprechaun its pot of gold.
What is left for a poet with his heart on his sleeve?
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© 2008 BlacK_diamond_Bay
Published on Wednesday, May 28, 2008.
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"Poetry"
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On Friday, September 7, 2018, Dilated View
(582)
wrote:
Man super cool idea for a poem and the visuals you selected to make your point really worked well here. What is left for us? An injured heart from being exposed and hopefully a connection with others who KNOW. Nicely written.
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A former member wrote:
I like to think our presence of mind and understanding from the amount of inspiration that crosses our eyes due to our fellow brothers and sister, raises our awareness...hence, wearing our heart on our sleeve never felt so good and right.teous.....would any of us really want to live any other way, we're the best kept secret on the face of the planet.
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A former member wrote:
i really really like this, sir.
i just cant think of the words to describe it. :)
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
stitches worn and torn... resewn and patched... but there it is, and could we keep it anywhere else?... nicely done
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A former member wrote:
we have that.. our hearts on our sleeve.. it's a beautiful thing.. fantastic write big bro.
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
Welcome to DP, brother of Tiger! Nice thoughts in succinct form here.
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A former member wrote:
to great, i loves it ( i actually know a guy like the first, made it sting so much more)
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A former member wrote:
I love this....how fantasy and the real merge beautifully to deliver the 'million dollar question'. I hope you find the answer...if you are looking for it.
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