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unfinished.possibly.
By totaltrip
in the distance
i see him waiting for me
wanting me
he thinks he's sure
he might even believe he knows
that he's sure
but i'm not there yet
i'm not there
to fog his clarity
to endow doubt on his certainty
i'm not there
to make him uneasy
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© 2008 totaltrip
Published on Monday, April 21, 2008.
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A former member wrote:
hmmmm that's a shame... I mean... there is delight in disorder.... there is sanctity in uncertainty.... very interesting, very probative...
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On Sunday, May 18, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
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wrote:
wow, very nice -symph-
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A former member wrote:
a very powerful write. wonderful as always. ~ hdb.
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