Silence
By Guillotine
Her eyes;
they speak of butterfly calamities-
moments of rapture, captured and
woven behind Saturn in her gaze.
Wouldst that she was here -
a soft touch, ivory dawn would lick fingers
upon the fine lattice of her bones...
sparrow-song caught breathless in her infinite melody;
the slowbeat song of her subtle heart.
I could swear these god-stroke nights were
but another shade of pale, awed
in her beauty.
And if I could I would make gift of this rose;
caught amongst wildflowers, frosted with dew
and the blood of romance;-
I would gladly give,
but every waking moment is
a mockery of the miles that lay between;
Every breath a thousand breaths apart.
So I wait, this rose and I -
from hours to days,
seasons to years....
til' these seconds turn to moments,
and your heart is all I hear...
Comments on "Silence"
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A former member wrote:
Incredibly dynamic and illustrative. I enjoyed every line. Thankyou for that lovely read.
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
breathlessly lovely and graceful...
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A former member wrote:
Immaculate. This spoke volumes to me. This is why you're on my fucking favorites, Luke, and god damn you...*heartclick*
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A former member wrote:
.....divinations of illuminated verse; the internal sounds of imbedded, imbued next to the external rhythms. .. something to recline in, bathe in--comparable to moonlight on skin. .. words that woo and smooth rough edges of life. . .egads; sublime stuff. ness
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On Monday, March 24, 2008, Organized_Chaos
(9) wrote:
Amazingly sweet...beautiful, simply beautiful!
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On Monday, March 24, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
Stunning piece...
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On Monday, March 24, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Alright this was an amazing piece and as much as I hate doing this I'm going to remove another favorite to make room... I feel this too damn perfectly... Exceptional piece, beautifully written
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A former member wrote:
*weeps* this reached deep. "til' these seconds turn to moments".. i feel this longing.. it's strong, heartbreaking and beautiful. just perfect.