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Whispers Guns and Ciggerettes
By GraveFlower
nicotine cant calm my nerves
sweet whispers cant fill my heart
--reload--
lke clockwork
i stare
-tick tick tick-
insanity
--cock--
if i was a chapter in your book
im asking you to erase me
wasps in my stomach
please delute the pain
is this murder?
--eye twitch--
after death?
i cant tell if im still breathing
or was it another life i took?
im like a cat,,,,
the nine life will be the last.
mine.
or
his.
irritable
shaky barral to my temple
.murder.
:slaughter:
black
**slilence**
breathless
yet i still endure the pain
.
.
.
murder after death
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© 2008 silent circus
Published on Thursday, March 6, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Whispers Guns and Ciggerettes"
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On Friday, March 7, 2008, Trigger
(70)
wrote:
Raw and delcious. This is very good. Really, very good. -Trigger
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
this flips the stomach of every innuendo and comes crawling right back again. intense and exceptional.
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
fuck this was amazing. damn.
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
Brutal.
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Downward spirral word allways make me rush through a poem the first time around. But it also makes the words more powerfull. Wonderfull. Love the title aswell
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
WOWW...very creative!!! er uhh I hope ;)
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
brutal and straight from the heart. i love your use of punctuations to create an image into the writing. the words danced on my tongue, fuckin mouth candy. yum. *cheers* ~ta
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
i read this aloud to myself. hehe you made me say cock, hehehe! ~ta ;)
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