young lover

By freudian-slip

Spirit of the youth is never wasted on the young.

Flashed light,
as beautiful as open mouthed lover on stage.

Smile...

All insecurities are thankfully lost,
momentarily,
while I struggle to regain nothing.

Because at that moment,
nothing else matters but your presence...

neither smell, sound, taste nor touch are as important,

as the present.

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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Saturday, March 1, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Saturday, March 1, 2008, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I agree with carlos this is fantabulous. I enjoyed the flow, meaning, and words. Well done.

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, March 1, 2008, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Fantabulous! Loaded with heart and meaning..Me lovie :) -Carl

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