If He Had Never Fallen
By Rhys Ki
There was my friend,
His shirt and pain unfurled,
Sitting in a corner of the earth,
Trapped at the end of the world.
I had followed the hurt
Until I found him there.
I inquired his condition,
As he pushed his hands through his hair.
Bridge: And none of it would’ve happened
If he had never fallen.
Chorus: He said, “What do you want,
The truth or a smile?
The list, it just grows,
And it goes on for miles,
Like the slit that she left
On my throat, deep and wide.
And I bled-out my love
Like she ripped out my pride.”
Then he said, “And that’s what she did
When she tore out my heart.
I don’t know what to do,
But I’m falling apart.”
(Bridge)
(Chorus)
So, I took him in my arms,
For his will was wearing thin.
Then, I opened-up my heart,
And shared its pieces with him.
(Bridge)
Comments on "If He Had Never Fallen"
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2007, Fantecstasy
(120) wrote:
Ending was very good... you grabbed hold of my heart strings with it...
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A former member wrote:
definitely some of the best lyrics I've read on here!Kudos :)
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On Tuesday, September 25, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
Thanks, guys. Support is much appreciated.
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On Tuesday, September 25, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
Sure, why not? La la-la... la!!!! Lol.
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A former member wrote:
I'm sure you have the music written too are you going to sing it for us? :)
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A former member wrote:
oh damn! i wish i could hear this. very beautiful
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On Monday, September 24, 2007, Preacher X
(34) wrote:
This is fantastic. I too would like to hear it set to music and i have some fo the ability to do that. If you wanna collaborate hit my DPMail. I'd love to work with you.
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A former member wrote:
my goodness...I love this. I'd DIE to hear it played and sung...Excellent regardless, though. Love love love it. ~*Beth*~