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Bury and Forget
By glasshouse
Breathe it in
the air might well
be poison anyway
cut it short
and save yourself
from pain in light of day
soak it up
you may not know
a darker side of love
push it down
it isn't something
made to rise above
-and its a maze
amazing you could make it
it's a lie
so just lie down and take it
at a loss
for words to make it better
bear the cross
then bury and forget her-
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© 2007 glasshouse
Published on Thursday, September 6, 2007.
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On Friday, September 7, 2007, Reefer_rave
(146)
wrote:
snappish but with understanding, not sure how to describe why I like it.
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On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
Let go and move on. Even in its sadness it has a positive message. Good Write.
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On Thursday, September 6, 2007, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a cynical but true whisper........told in your prose.........welll done
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On Thursday, September 6, 2007, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
shadows slipping along a thin ledge of sadness, causes a lot of mind and heart turning... over and around... drifting deeper... nicely done hun
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On Thursday, September 6, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
A cross, my shield on the altar of her neck .. Came to think of that Sean Penn movie line. I do not think there is actual death in this poem however. The msg seems more of a personal breakup related poem to a friend.
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On Thursday, September 6, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Still I wonder and I think the question makes the poem stronger.
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On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
the darker side of love is also the deepest.... in my opinion. well put
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A former member wrote:
The air is only poison when you set out the toxic.. ~OttO~
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