pin you to my chest *part 2

By GoldenLotus

i close my eyes
to see
your wings
to feel
your breath
to hear
your whispers

i sew my feelings
onto my skin
they dangle
by just a thread
and
the pins
i’ve pinned onto my chest
lie in the darkness
of your caress

i reach out with
untouchable
intangible
emotions
to smell
to sense
to know your beauty
your embrace

i open my heart
my soul
my love
and
wish for forever
to never come

the petals of passion
taste of lust
disintegrated love
turns to dust
spread the ashes
across my flesh
this love of ours
pinned to my chest

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Published on Wednesday, October 22, 2014. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "pin you to my chest *part 2"

On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Narcissa (391) wrote:

Lovely...
On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47) wrote:

ty:)
On Thursday, September 6, 2007, glasshouse (530) wrote:

I dug this. For sure. The last stanza was particularly well worded. I enjoyed, the way I'm sure you enjoyed writing it. It seems like a the (no pun intended) get it off your chest kind of piece. Well done. --Jes
On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47) wrote:

thank you for your kind words~
On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

"I open my heart my soul my love and wish for forever to never come" yes.
On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47) wrote:

thanks for the comment...happy you enjoyed that line...it is one of my fav's
On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Kurashu (29) wrote:

Simply amazing. To feel this close to someone is an impossible euphoria; yet, we have it in our every day lives.
On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

i have someone i feel this close to, but you rip the words from a dry tongue, breathless lung. i wish i could say it like you
On Thursday, September 6, 2007, GoldenLotus (47) wrote:

thank you so much..your comments...always respected.