Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch
By Dancing_Monkey
such light only seen through the cores of apples.
Waiting for the second best; To trip in your shoe laces
Arrange these thoughts within bones and cry the roosters last call.
When it takes flight it carries the souls of us,together on a field of
purple parts dancing .
I fling my frown on your black beauty for it has stained
That which granny knitted her last summer, such skills for a winters child.
End our long journey, this is only the beginning of a shallow spire, absolution
and the lips of wine
(Co write with symphonytothedead)
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© 2007 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Wednesday, July 25, 2007.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch"
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A former member wrote:
You have such a beautiful mind, as soon as i'm accepted as a memeber you will be on my favourites list! Such beauty in every line of what you write, I'd like to meet your muse!
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On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
see what happens when you give a monkey a pen! mind destruction, and a stab in the eye... i have looked through an applecore, and it was beautiful... awsome write.
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On Thursday, August 2, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
from this i get a sense of competetion and maybe sabotage? innocence and perhaps a cold shoulder but remorse at the same time? very hazy but i like it a lot...especially the first sentence...
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On Thursday, August 2, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
to me the first sentence sounds like finding happiness or personal truth in over indulgence...perhaps i'm wrong. i like the wrid all the same. as is every work of yours co written or not...it's a mind bender ;)
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A former member wrote:
this was grrreat! Kudos to both of you :)
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A former member wrote:
Cruelly interesting read. Something to chew on for a bit. ~Ship!
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On Thursday, July 26, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
I loved the last three lines. Magic!
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A former member wrote:
awesome, you two! you just kicked my ass..
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
crazy. awesome. so totally had a hard time wrapping my mind around it. lol. pretty delectable.
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Just got wicked.
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
hahaha i love this...we should write another some time good sir :) -symph-
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Preaty neat yes *Nod nod*