Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch

By Dancing_Monkey

such light only seen through the cores of apples.
Waiting for the second best; To trip in your shoe laces
Arrange these thoughts within bones and cry the roosters last call.
When it takes flight it carries the souls of us,together on a field of purple parts dancing .
I fling my frown on your black beauty for it has stained
That which granny knitted her last summer, such skills for a winters child.
End our long journey, this is only the beginning of a shallow spire, absolution and the lips of wine


(Co write with symphonytothedead)

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© 2007 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Wednesday, July 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: You have such a beautiful mind, as soon as i'm accepted as a memeber you will be on my favourites list! Such beauty in every line of what you write, I'd like to meet your muse!

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    see what happens when you give a monkey a pen! mind destruction, and a stab in the eye... i have looked through an applecore, and it was beautiful... awsome write.

  • sIo On Thursday, August 2, 2007, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    from this i get a sense of competetion and maybe sabotage? innocence and perhaps a cold shoulder but remorse at the same time? very hazy but i like it a lot...especially the first sentence...

  • sIo On Thursday, August 2, 2007, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    to me the first sentence sounds like finding happiness or personal truth in over indulgence...perhaps i'm wrong. i like the wrid all the same. as is every work of yours co written or not...it's a mind bender ;)

  • A former member wrote: this was grrreat! Kudos to both of you :)

  • A former member wrote: Cruelly interesting read. Something to chew on for a bit. ~Ship!

  • nur hidayah On Thursday, July 26, 2007, nur hidayah (116)By person wrote:

    I loved the last three lines. Magic!

  • A former member wrote: awesome, you two! you just kicked my ass..

  • torn_beauty On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, torn_beauty (77)By person wrote:

    crazy. awesome. so totally had a hard time wrapping my mind around it. lol. pretty delectable.

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Just got wicked.

  • Rebel tiGer King On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Rebel tiGer King (258)By person wrote:

    hahaha i love this...we should write another some time good sir :) -symph-

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Preaty neat yes *Nod nod*

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