Ode to a mosquito bite

By snow

Oh how I yearn to touch you knowing how it would feel if

I just touched it if I dragged my nails against you
how sweet it would feel how I would yearn for more
yet know how much I will pay for it later.
Yet I continue to run my nails against the now red flesh
where you had bit me and taken what you wanted from me and
left me with this desire burning within me.

All I need to do was touch the spot where
you left a reminder of your presence in my life.
And all the memories will come flooding back to me.
Urging me onwards to fulfill this desire burning within.
Then I give in I begin to rub it hoping the feeling will go away but
it just makes it worse it makes me want to
just rip that piece of skin off so I wouldn’t feel
the increscent desire any more.
This desire which will remain unfilled……..




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© 2007 snow
Published on Sunday, July 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"
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  • worm On Friday, July 21, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    this is good...

  • carlosjackal On Monday, February 25, 2008, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    True human nature wrought so bloody well. -Carl

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, December 27, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Loved this one! Nice mix of humour and imagery. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Lol...bastard mozzies!! Scholar

  • Trigger On Friday, October 19, 2007, Trigger (68)By person wrote:

    I like the inspiration. Fun read.

  • Niemand On Monday, October 15, 2007, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Never thought such a thing was possible... Nice write.-Airi

  • Winter Born On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Winter Born (169)By person wrote:

    An almost masochistic desire for self control. I love mosquito bites. Very well written, and it has a good beat.

  • snow On Saturday, July 21, 2007, snow (14)By person wrote:

    thanks for all your coments i'll c if i can come up wit some thing else. yet inspiration fades too quickly

  • Err0r On Friday, July 20, 2007, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Hahaha. :D This is very clever. I enjoyed this write to the fullest. Also, you made me itchy. =P Thanks.

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, July 17, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    funny, nice read.

  • darkdesires On Monday, July 16, 2007, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    great piece I love how its just perfect... gives you just enough detail, length, passion, ugh... great job.

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