forest of silence
By whisperer
enter the forest
a maze of mists darkened
wizened oak and aspen gnarled and thick sway without a breeze and some
unseen river's muffled roar permeates the brisk fog filled air around you
a moss dirt dance floor crowded by the gods and goddesses of old in a timeless
dance to the sounds of gagged silence
my home is here
a demi god among giants
a tender of leaves, each one a life where each pain is an illusion
laid gently to rest by the whispering wind
an ender of words
for the timeless; such trivialities are lost degredations and meaningless
interruptions to action
i am tested with maintaining the silence
balanced upon the last dying note of lifes embracing song faced with my
undoing time to pull the bullet while all who watch probly knew it all
my pain is an illusion
burnt by a breeze disease control eminating fuck it
breathe
in silence all is as it should be
in all it's chaotic tranquility
Comments on "forest of silence"
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A former member wrote:
i was hooked from the first two lines XD
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A former member wrote:
"In silence all is as it should be...in all its chaotic tranquility" - powerful line out of a very powerful and well written poem.
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully decorated with images of the interior - dark - enchanted forest of ur soul - bringing us thirsty into your realm. well done *alone*
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On Tuesday, August 15, 2006, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
you have said alot with a few selected words, you have such talent! you are a beautiful writer.
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A former member wrote:
very good i like this very much
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A former member wrote:
This is a beautiful poem. And it has beautiful rhyming. This is also very well written.