Objectification of A Lovers Dreams

By Alacer_Cogitatus

Dreams are made of
Lies, and wishful thoughts,
But the worst dreams,
are those of Lovers.
Images of Non Reality
Clouded Visions of
Happiness, success and contentment,
Confuse and perplex.
Love, Never Concrete
Yet always elusive
contemplation of
forever
necessitates
commitment

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Copyright 2004 Alacer_Cogitatus
Published on Thursday, April 30, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: beautifully written

  • KittyStryker On Monday, August 23, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    ah, but dreams also offer hope and beauty... you just have to take them with a grain of salt. :) nice write.

  • NikesRain On Sunday, June 27, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    so true, always left with a wanting sigh..Nicely done.

  • murder_in_clubland On Saturday, June 26, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    I love this....its beautiful

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    As wonderful a write as this was, it also made me shiver.. I try my best not to believe everythign you've expressed in this.. "Love, Never Concrete", so true. Awesome work.

  • Midnight Shadow On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    Ah, yes this is so truthful and well, how am I supposed to describe this? lol...great write AC, you left me speechless once again, always a good thing. ~Tracy

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