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Snow Angels and Bloodstains
By soldier
you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your
blood
love - your lips start to grow cold
love - I rip
your insides out
love - I feast on your dead flesh
I can't love
you anymore
you asked me to play in the snow with you
so
I made an angel in your blood
like a snow flake
you came
and stuck
then I saw the light
and you melted
there
is no snow in hell
you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your blood
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Copyright 2010 soldier
Published on Wednesday, February 24, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
death metal song I wroteAwards
Comments on "Snow Angels and Bloodstains"
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2010, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303)
wrote:
Twisted. Morbid. Brutal. I approve! :)
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2010, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
dude. thats brutal....you must have had a lot of hatred for this bitch......
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On Saturday, March 27, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
Hmm, very nice, it sounds like it would make a nice Metal song, I give this a TEN, thanks for the write.
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On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
YOU ARE TWISTED. Thank-you for a finely written piece, I am impressed. write on.
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On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
yeah...i'll have to check out that link. That was awesome. short, sweet, and definitely stuck...bloodstuck on me. Loved it!
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On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
This would make an awesome death metal song, I can actually hear music when I read it too. Great write.
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On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, soldier
(22) wrote:
go here http://www.myspace.com/endofnovembermetal and you'll be able to hear the actual music
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On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Listened to the music, that's some badass death metal.
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