Snow Angels and Bloodstains

By soldier

you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your blood

love - your lips start to grow cold
love - I rip your insides out
love - I feast on your dead flesh
I can't love you anymore

you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your blood

like a snow flake
you came and stuck
then I saw the light
and you melted

there is no snow in hell

you asked me to play in the snow with you
so I made an angel in your blood

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Copyright 2010 soldier
Published on Wednesday, February 24, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

death metal song I wrote
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  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Tuesday, May 25, 2010, Dreaming in Stanzas (332)By person wrote:

    Twisted. Morbid. Brutal. I approve! :)

  • GraveFlower On Tuesday, May 18, 2010, GraveFlower (283)By person wrote:

    dude. thats brutal....you must have had a lot of hatred for this bitch......

  • DK6_Marius On Saturday, March 27, 2010, DK6_Marius (309)By person wrote:

    Hmm, very nice, it sounds like it would make a nice Metal song, I give this a TEN, thanks for the write. Scholar

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Malcholm Dark (1043)By person wrote:

    YOU ARE TWISTED. Thank-you for a finely written piece, I am impressed. write on.

  • RubyXero On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, RubyXero (579)By person wrote:

    yeah...i'll have to check out that link. That was awesome. short, sweet, and definitely stuck...bloodstuck on me. Loved it!

  • lupus tenebrae On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae (1028)By person wrote:

    This would make an awesome death metal song, I can actually hear music when I read it too. Great write. Scholar

  • soldier On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, soldier (24)By person wrote:

    go here http://www.myspace.com/endofnovembermetal and you'll be able to hear the actual music

  • lupus tenebrae On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae (1028)By person wrote:

    Listened to the music, that's some badass death metal. Scholar

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