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Yours Immortal
By Leith Plunkett
Kiss me with apple blossom sweetness…
as floating petals kiss the grass
Caress me with feather softness…
as the lulling clouds caress the hills
Take my hand in loves forever…
as the moons hand embraces tide
Make love to me like there is no tomorrow…
passionate as suns eclipse
Entrance my vision with lover’s lust…
with fanged vampiric intent
May our lost souls dance forever where mortal bodies fear
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© 2008 soul carnage
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On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette
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wrote:
oh Leith, how I miss these soft pieces from you.
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A former member wrote:
I love this i feel a spell that placed over me cuasing the realm which you think to wash over me when i read this poem making me feel happy and understand the passion of love i have yet to have
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Yeah, damn. Makes me wish for immortality. Every line whispered something enigmatic, yet real and passionate. Nicely done!
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On Monday, November 10, 2008, disposable
(105) wrote:
yowza! what took you so long leith?! im suprised u didnt explode with all the beauty inside you. thanks for dousing us with a little. I AM HONORED! write on...
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On Thursday, November 6, 2008, Scarrzz
(238) wrote:
This begins softly and beautifully, constantly gaining intensity to a climax that attains escape velocity, and then a one-line anticlimax that assures a stable orbit, leaving the reader floating in reflection. Excellent piece, I very much enjoyed it.
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On Sunday, October 5, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
"fanged vampire intent" bloody fanfuckingtastic
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A former member wrote:
The last line is gorgeous, so gorgeous. I felt my heart tremble in the wake of these words.
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On Saturday, October 4, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
Coming from a poet with your experience i am honoured. thankyou :-)
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On Wednesday, October 1, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(178) wrote:
Very lovely, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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On Wednesday, October 1, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
I could see the dance behind these words, beautiful. Write on
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