Comments by Eladrim
- "yeah i was experimenting with a choppy kinda rhyme...wasn't sure if it was gonna work or not"
Posted by Eladrim on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "thanks for the comment, what you said was more than good enough because it's what you felt"
Posted by Eladrim on "You" by Eladrim
- "very true, and whatever we think we know is often false assumption"
Posted by Eladrim on "Fate" by Eladrim
- "brilliant! "half blinded by the sleep of innocence" i love that, just like innocence is bliss. great work -Jesse"
Posted by Eladrim on "Waters" by Lord Kalgalath
- "i feel you 100 percent, not knowing is a torture because it's human nature to hold on to the smallest bit of hope with the most inhuman of strength"
Posted by Eladrim on "happy and broken" by darkdesires
- "thank you for the welcome, yes i figured everybody can understand how life is pain, if not they're lying to themselves"
Posted by Eladrim on "A Life of Pain" by Eladrim
- "Amen. I love the lines-
But only pain seaps through
When mouths utter I Love You
And stammer to cover up passion
with casual conversation"
Posted by Eladrim on "Casual Conversation" by VenomPlease
- "The Crimson Queen- trying to improve my writing, what thoughts does it provoke? (anyone know why it won't let me reply?)"
Posted by Eladrim on "A Life of Pain" by Eladrim
- "I don't know why i can't reply to comments...so i'll do it this way. thanks for the welcome kristy and the approval WhiteHorse. As my profile states i'm very new at this so i appreciate comments"
Posted by Eladrim on "Ice" by Eladrim
