Comments by serotonin lost
- "like i just said to you, everytime your fingers gace the keys of that computer that has see "god knows" how many tears. the echo of your pain.... chills the very fibres of me. the last 7 lines... you painted a monster with the feather of a dove. as alway"
Posted by serotonin lost on "featherlessly flying-where the moon gave way" by sIo
- "is there anything you wouldn't say? always when i read your words, there can be no error in what you wanted to say. there is no escaping the truths you bleed. I am again sorrowed. but al the better for it"
Posted by serotonin lost on "sin addiction" by Possesion
- "if you want space i have plenty of room on mine... as for the poem. have you ever concidered moving the side line back? so if they want to "gawk" they have to actually be closer to you?
love the whole hatred feel to this though."
Posted by serotonin lost on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion
- "poem isn't about the rhyme's but you definatly nailed them in this, it flows, rhymes, has meaning and emotion. by all standards an excellant piece."
Posted by serotonin lost on "Hidden From This World" by Adam
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