Hidden From This World

By Adam

Hidden from this world

I’m frustrated I can’t be with the person I love

This jealousy I feel is tight around me like a glove

Tighter and tighter it comes till I have no more room for other desires

The more hope I find, the more I want to become like a crier

The louder I tell, the more vulnerable I become the more vulnerable I become the more fear I find

My fear is surrounded by envy and loneliness that can’t even be filled by praying to the divine

If this person finds out about this loneliness and pain

It will be like being stuck in the rain

The embarrassment and helplessness I’ll discover

I just hope these feelings never get uncovered.

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Copyright 2005 aldldl1989
Published on Monday, September 12, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: I read this and then read it again. I can absolutely relate to this feeling. Repressing your feelings to the point of madness is all too familiar. Excellent write.

  • PentaGram On Monday, November 24, 2014, PentaGram (27)By person wrote:

    Awesome write thank you for sharing, we all have felt this kind of love and you described it quite amazing.

  • A former member wrote: I know how this feels all to well. Great write!

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Thursday, November 23, 2006, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    I can relate to this one as well. Just try not to let your emotions totally govern your life. You deserve more.

  • A former member wrote: "Tighter and tighter it comes till I have no more room for other desires " I like that line ALOT...Great writes

  • Adam On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    Thanks! Scholar

  • Darkest_Addiction On Sunday, January 1, 2006, Darkest_Addiction (44)By person wrote:

    "This jealousy I feel is tight around me like a glove" i just love this line i know this feeling a little to well

  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    i could've sworn i commented on this..but i didnt. so..damn adam..you've captured my feelings exactly..theres somebody i like, that i wouldnt have a chance with..and..this just..amazes me, cuz i could never write anything as good as this...-Kel

  • sIo On Sunday, November 6, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    My fear is surrounded by envy and loneliness that can’t even be filled by praying to the divine < that line is fucking beautiful.

  • Adam On Wednesday, November 30, 2005, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    Being told I [one of my woks] am beautiful by one of the best and most beautiful poets on the site is humbling and I am very thankful thanks so much sIo Scholar

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Thursday, November 3, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    stuck in the rain or maybe better stuck out in the rain, feeling the nakedness of your emotions, i like the rareness of your emotion, use it in more of your writes

  • A former member wrote: I am not sure if this is your best (that I will find out when I read more of your work) but for now it is #1

  • Adam On Thursday, October 20, 2005, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    thanks. let me know Scholar

  • serotonin lost On Friday, September 16, 2005, serotonin lost (145)By person wrote:

    poem isn't about the rhyme's but you definatly nailed them in this, it flows, rhymes, has meaning and emotion. by all standards an excellant piece.

  • vaultgrl On Monday, September 12, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    that was great adam, I can relate totally...

  • Adam On Monday, September 12, 2005, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    This my best in terms of poems I think. feed back is welcome. Scholar

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