Comments by blue angel
- "Woo..fans self to cool down... oh yes this is a very sweet treat! Looks like cupid pointed his arrow in the right direction... nicely inked...blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "A Valentine's Box" by Peyton1
- "Torn between the fabric of inner space and lost time--
I sift through fragments of madness to start a new rhyme.
"Playing with the darkness thru a reflective black shard--
The deck starts a new game now, without its high card."
Damn Man!!! You blow the roof off the ol' Dark House with your poignant ink! Glad to see you slingin' it again!! You lay your cards on the table nicely. Love how you add your signature in there too! Very cool write and it hits deep in those sensitive spots too! You were missed! - blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Fragments of Madness" by Peyton1
- "Glad I caught you, since I'm rarely finding time to be here. Hum, lets see. Well, I personally see reflections of, religious undertones combined with music and movies, then a sexual touch near the end with the sweet release inside her. Yet, pale rider will always remind me of Clint Eastwood, but I do get a weird 'sandman' image, that being the reason I said music, and then a little Nicolas Cage imagery. It's quite taxing to try and climb inside someone else's mind for poetic clarity. Poetry is cool for it's layer effect, but I find it quite difficult to actually stick to one internal theme throughout on entire poem. They usually turn out to be a collage effect of personal reflecting. Right on - Ride on !!"
Posted by blue angel on "Death Ryder" by Peyton1
- "I knew I came here for some reason,, darkpoetry I mean. Wow, this has a backstreet Noir feel to it. Powerful stuff to say the least. And your author's note just sends the whole piece skyrocketing ... _I'm behind in reading, I shall return. cheers til next time :)
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Posted by blue angel on "Krash Kart " by Peyton1
- "I love the repetition of the heart, and I love the 3 am/ dream inspirations. Very sincere penning. You are certainly a man that keeps his focus steady and true. :) thanks for sharing and for commenting on mine. !! "
Posted by blue angel on "You're My....." by Peyton1
- "It looks sexy in black... :) That last line pops the cork.. Glad you posted it here! Nice ink, hotrod*"
Posted by blue angel on "I Wonder....." by Peyton1
- "wow, that response to me, is poetry of the finest nature... I'm in awe... speechless .................................. and I hope you will be doubly blessed ;)~"
Posted by blue angel on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "This is of a pure natured beauty and soulful emotions interwoven within the heart's pleas.... It is utterly gracious from a devoted Valentine... Creative and heartfelt to say the least... Nicely inked, hotrod... Ace :)~ "
Posted by blue angel on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "Visually the unraveling of your poem is pleasing. Yet, is felt with a warming sensation that quickly turns into a rope burn as it twists tightly around your heart. It's painful to read and you display it so gracefully, though. Smile for me hotrod :)~ You'll find your footing very soon. I've read this one before but had trouble responding... still it feels as though my words fall flat."
Posted by blue angel on "'Leaving Hope' behind..." by Peyton1
- "Wow.. dang this is quite painful yet beautifully penned with a perfect rhyme;) A sweet release to ease the pain, hopefully* Well done, Peyton !"
Posted by blue angel on "Cruel Twist of Fate" by Peyton1
