Krash Kart

By Peyton1

A shot through the heart,
I'm still feelin' the pain.
Lying motionless on the kart,
silent screams are in vain.

You assume I'm already numb,
seeing my blank, empty stare.
Are you deaf or am I dumb?
Doesn't anyone even care?

Straps from beneath are binding,
call it a tribute to my demise.
The light above me is blinding,
so again I close my eyes.

A shock surges through this place,
I'm wrapped tightly within her arms.
A stronger jolt....I can still see her face,
but can't hear her past all these alarms.

She drifts away into the distance.
Wait! Don't go! Please come back!
White ceiling tiles I see for an instant,
then I watch it fade again to black.

I hear them telling me I should fight,
I wish they would just leave me alone.
Go away! Come back in the next life!
Let me leave this one.....if she's gone.

I wave but..........she doesn't see me.
Soon I'll be just another chalk outline.
I'd stay but.........she doesn't need me.
I guess that's why they call it flatline.

Maximum volts but the paddles can't win.
The room spins into echo, then goes dim.
"Still no pulse, doc.......call it......3:00am."

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Copyright 2014 Peyton1
Published on Saturday, July 19, 2014.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I flatlined twice and they got me back twice. The third time they gave up, but I found my own way back
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  • Just Dave On Friday, September 8, 2017, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    Jesus. Very well done. Gripping Found this in the random poems link. Glad I found it. Nice read. JD

  • Peyton1 On Thursday, April 4, 2019, Peyton1 (205)By person wrote:

    Thanks Dave, I appreciate your comment. I held back on this write, I remembered allot more than I penned here. The complete "Walkthru" will be posted soon that tells the whole story. They said I wouldn't remember...... they were wrong.................. ~Ace~

  • blue angel On Tuesday, July 22, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    I knew I came here for some reason,, darkpoetry I mean. Wow, this has a backstreet Noir feel to it. Powerful stuff to say the least. And your author's note just sends the whole piece skyrocketing ... _I'm behind in reading, I shall return. cheers til next time :)

  • Peyton1 On Saturday, January 3, 2015, Peyton1 (205)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much for commenting miss Kendra. Sorry I haven't been on here much in a while, I have really missed you guys!!............................ ~Ace~

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