Comments by Leineco

"Astoundingly good. Each line finely crafted, leading the reader through with no squirming room. Lightning bright ending!"
Posted by Leineco on "Dead Butterflies" by TakeMeAsIAm

"precisely. Thank you for commenting :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Death Watch" by Leineco

"Thank you :-) "Independent" -- I like that :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Hunger" by Leineco

"Thank you :-) I'm so glad you got the empowerment vibe :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Hunger" by Leineco

"This poem is brutally succinct - leaving no wriggle room - the reader simply cannot look away. A powerful accomplishment I must say though...the compacted version that arrived in my e-mail as poem of the day might actually be the slightly better format. Either way....an outstanding poem :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "angel in the details" by Armand

"ahhh...the treasure of our treasures. A meeting between our past and our future, our memories and our dreams. All told in lovely rhyme and meter punctuated with iconic imagery: heart too swollen to scold... my mothers precious possessions... lent her some for a princess hour... watching my history repeat ... a story well told."
Posted by Leineco on "Jewellery box " by Stephanie Sideways

"How to express these memories...and echoes. How many bits and pieces rattle around in our heads. Nostalgia and fact intertwined. Nice piece"
Posted by Leineco on "Back When We Were Innocent" by johntaiyu

"compellingly written - evocative of so many memories and regrets. It's amazing how crystal clear those moments are (the background sounds, the scents, the sharp need to "take it back") even through a very deep window in time. I think you captured angry regret and futility's weight in a stark light of clarity."
Posted by Leineco on "Cracked Mirror Outlook" by DarkDruidess

"Two things come through very clearly..the madness of this spiraling descent...and the compulsion to pursue it. The mood and tone effectively maintain the analytical frame of mind, and at the same time enforce the concept of rationalization by "insanity". And of course, the poem itself successfully transmits the seductive pull of depression. Very effective poem"
Posted by Leineco on "The Tower of Madness" by Melancholic VIncent

"What a nice lighthearted read...just what my frazzled mind needed today! Thanx :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "My Sacred Sanctuary" by daiglepoems

"Thank you :-) I do try to make the spurning as pleasant as possible for the spurnee LOL"
Posted by Leineco on "Scorned Advances " by Leineco

"Thank you so much for your commentary I am pleased you caught Petrarch lurking in the shadows. :-) I agree (more or less) with faltering on the reversal, although there is a slight expansion/heightening from loving an individual to loving any individual, ever again. Then concluding back with the individual rejection. I must admit, I had not, consciously, considered the reversal that lies in the very concept of using the "love poem" form to the anti...yikes...I am smarter than I thought ;-D Thanks again for the ego boosting comments :-) "
Posted by Leineco on "Scorned Advances " by Leineco

"hear that is. Permission granted :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Scorned Advances " by Leineco

"Thank you...I wanted to try out the "classical" voice. I am glad to her it worked :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Scorned Advances " by Leineco

"how many times must I say it...how many times must you hear, before it is perfectly clear....your advances are not welcome here!."
Posted by Leineco on "Scorned Advances " by Leineco

"Thank you (third attempt...hope this goes thru :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Family Legacy" by Leineco

"Thank you (third attempt...hope this goes thru :-)"
Posted by Leineco on "Family Legacy" by Leineco

"Thank you (I don't think my original thanx got through....trying to learn my way around here - sorry if this is a repeat)"
Posted by Leineco on "Who Do You Think You Are" by Leineco

"Thank you ( :-( I don't think ,y first response got through - just learning my way around)"
Posted by Leineco on "Somewhere" by Leineco