Comments by purr_verse
- ""the view i let it fade
the soul you let it change" - i love this couplet... The title, and how it's used within the piece, is also very well done. lovely write. "
Posted by purr_verse on "Coffee stains the face" by maddin foxxxy
- "fabulous piece, this! sorry i came to it so late (love that Random button, heheh) ... beautiful, heartfelt, original, compelling, lovely write. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "The Worst Of Poets" by maddin foxxxy
- "great imagery, both original and vivid... a poignantly emotional piece with a fantastic conclusion...soft and painful simultaneously... and i really love "waiting maKes her wonder
wonder makes her need" especially. :)
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Posted by purr_verse on "Aid to the chilD" by maddin foxxxy
- "beautiful work, and "I will not edit
my words / But I will breathe in
more than I need to..." is just marvellous...you've captured this sensation perfectly. purr
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Posted by purr_verse on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "This is a great poem... I especially like the fourth stanza - that's beautifully observed. well done! :) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
