Comments by Invisible Girl

"One of your better writes for sure! I love the end.. It's perfect. Brutally beautiful."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Spasmodic Heart" by Melancholic VIncent

"I do love the dark and twisty of this... Do the stairs on the tower of madness travel up or down... And does one know which direction he is going when climbing??? Hmmm"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "The Tower of Madness" by Melancholic VIncent

"You see her for what she is... and who she is. You are better. The demons you have created are a way to survive.. but you, my friend, are going to rise higher. You will be a light for others who live with the same hell. You will be a demon hunter of the mind. Freeing yourself and others from the ghosts in their heads. An intellectual who will be educated and also holds the trump card of experience. I have faith in you to become someone great. ...btw- the last line is bullshit...just saying..lol well done"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Motherless Abomination" by Melancholic VIncent

"How did I miss this?? I can relate to this post! You feel pity for it? It wouldn't have mercy on you. This is heady..the beast always wants to be free...sometimes it takes all our strength to keep it confined within..well done!"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Beware of the Dog" by Melancholic VIncent

"My turn to decipher.. lol I think the night and shadows symbolize your hiding from something in your life that you don't want brought out into the open..You have a personality that needs to shine in the light- so get rid of that thing that has you wanting to hide -only then will you find peace in the darkness.."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Cimmerian Light" by Melancholic VIncent

"First rate poem my friend- you could not have ended this better- I love the last two lines. You always see things in a perspective that makes me want to try harder..thank you"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Polytheism" by Melancholic VIncent

"exquisite word choices.. a beautiful passionate tribute my friend. well done"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Hypnotic Attraction" by Melancholic VIncent

"All those loose ends.. perhaps if they are braided they would be more easily handled? Gather them up my friend and bind them! You have the power- claim it!"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Loose Ends" by Melancholic VIncent

"It is never wasted time on ones knees in prayer my friend. Although preferably not up on rooftops when depressed. Your word choice made me feel your anguish in this. Well done."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Unforgiven" by Melancholic VIncent

"Deep thoughts..well done . Reality is not enough... I hear that! "
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Being Human" by Melancholic VIncent

"Very clever. You tell a story that captivates and makes us think. Pride cometh before the fall.."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Lesser of Two Evils" by Melancholic VIncent

"Perfect title on this one. The confliction and the battle within..no rest. No mercy. Great!"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Bipolar" by Melancholic VIncent

"absorbs my spirit in a vortex of immense loneliness.. Small soul, big universe... love this "
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Destroyer of Worlds" by Melancholic VIncent

" A Slow and torturous cleansing. You do this darker shade very well."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Bio-Hazard " by Melancholic VIncent

"It has been said that there is a fine line between genius and insanity...I do believe, my friend, that you fall on the side of genius."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Fallacious Reality " by Melancholic VIncent

"Astute and tender ..with a glimpse of hope. . Your words always deliver. "
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Mona Lisa smile" by Melancholic VIncent

"Intense writing. Very raw. You touch me through your words. "
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Where art thou my brother?" by Melancholic VIncent

"We die and live again as something else with no chance of saying goodbye to our former self. So very true.. This is now my new favorite of yours."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent

"Wow this is great. I had to read it three times..my favorite line is "rooted creatures,twisting themselves to the wind of centuries". I would love to see you write something wrapped around that line. Haunting.."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Madman's Box" by Melancholic VIncent