Bipolar

By Melancholic VIncent

Fatigued eyes grasp on the horizon
Mirroring the crimson-melted sky
While the sun extinguishes in distant mountains
Kinesthetic apathy invades my body
Hard as rocks of the arid desert
A statue of dormant soul
Is part of the narcoleptic scenery

Muffled screams from within
Scare away this fake serenity
Bottle of effervescent rage
Epicenter in deep waters
Opressed emotions and trampled on feelings
Bring to the coast the fury of high seas
Waves loaded with frustration eclipse the sun
Bringing the apocalypse of a choleric deluge

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Copyright 2012 Melancholic VIncent
Published on Wednesday, July 11, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AngelicDemonMelisandre On Friday, July 20, 2012, AngelicDemonMelisandre (26)By person wrote:

    My step-sister was severely bi-polar and had split personalites...if she was in her "Bambi" state she would've loved this. Wonderful work.

  • Melancholic VIncent On Friday, July 20, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    I am no bipolar and don't know anyone who is, but I guess it would be something like this. Best of luck with your step-sis, it must be hard. Thanks for your comment, check my other work

  • Invisible Girl On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    Perfect title on this one. The confliction and the battle within..no rest. No mercy. Great!

  • Melancholic VIncent On Thursday, July 12, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    I just went with the flow on this one, I didn't think in anything when writing it, I was merely moved by the power of inspiration

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