Comments by Aleas
- "Funny, I *just* brought this up the other day in conversation - To inspire, all it takes is a word, or as the word implies, in-spire, "to breathe in". Sometimes all it takes is a breath. Chin up, and take a deep one. =p"
Posted by Aleas on "Attempt at words" by Musik2MyEyes
- "There is a quote I'm reminded of reading that last line: "and light only penetrates the darkness that's already there, and I am already there." And to think she smiles at you every day!..and probably screams for you in the middle of the night when all you want is 5 consecutive minutes of sleep but hot damn if it ain't worth it all! I can't believe this was hardly commented on. Shame be to the commenters! "
Posted by Aleas on "Mirrors" by RubyXero
- "God damn, you kick some ass. Nay, not just some ass. Just ass. You kick it. I wouldn't even know where to begin. Probably at the end, of which, I can only say, I feel sorry for "he"."
Posted by Aleas on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "Hello? How we doin'? Im hoping this poem is not entirely indicative of what Im thinking this is about. Either way, much love. Chat me up sometime?"
Posted by Aleas on "Gods forgivness" by brie_leigh
- "Staggering.. I like the thought of the twisted mutant not being personified, how the face stays the same; same smile, same laugh, but the inside is what has deviated. And still with the same physical features, we can all see the difference. Neat!"
Posted by Aleas on "misconceptions" by Moonflower
- "If I can't, then you can't. Id prefer, if I can't, then show me, and if you can't, I'm here to help. Vacuum cleaners are simple though...might have something to do with the air in California - It all goes to their heads. Whoops! Another stereotype!"
Posted by Aleas on "Hotwheels" by OverratedGirl
- "Waking up is always the hardest part. May not have been what you were talking about, but I gathered that for myself. A realization that the past was nothing but a dream that unprepares you for the real thing, what you see when you finally burn the skin from blind eyes. Like seeing for the first time, it's painful. Wonderful turn of conscience."
Posted by Aleas on "Freedom: Act 1, Scene 1" by DescendingDown
- "We want pics! We want pics! Im so glad to you made it through ok. I will get to your email the moment I have more than enough time to dedicate to it. You deserve it! Im so happy for you!"
Posted by Aleas on "baby boy" by brie_leigh
- "A smattering of false metaphors and climactic troughs - self fulfilling collapse, stagnant fervor, acceptable mediocrity, top dollar second rate - Such human (natural) imagery, that feeling of (natural) depression with the glimmer of knowing you're more than what you see. Great piece o'writing."
Posted by Aleas on "Completely Within My Reach" by surething
- "You gotta do what you gotta do. A mighty piece would fall from the foundation of this home, but you've more than cemented your place. Truth is, youre not dead, and this is no graveyard, and no matter how long your gone your niche here will be fruitful and abundantly graced and revisited. As for your profile page, look around you, my man. There's so much more to (un)hinge yourself from. This life is more than dreams and hopes, love and fear. Conscious is simply a state of mind that WON'T last forever. And so long as you open your eyes each morning to this world, you'll always make a difference in it, and you'll always have a reason to write. "
Posted by Aleas on "Stardeath" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "It's like you never stopped posting. I'm very glad to see you back! "I still want mo, mo, more!""
Posted by Aleas on "The happy people" by Any
- "Dude, the rhyme is in the flow, and in words that may not be spelled exactly the same with a simple change of the first consonant. There's more to rhyming than simple timing. I'd say Whisperer is one of the most solid spoken word artist Ive come across here. Which I really didnt notice until this post. I need to pay more attention..."
Posted by Aleas on "discourse with a collector of the dead (w/collecting cadavers?" by whisperer
- "Da-yamn. This took hold and just didn't let go. Still feels like I'm choking here. Definitely worth another go around. Glad to see another post from you!"
Posted by Aleas on "Red Like Violence" by TheUltimateOutlaw
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