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misconceptions
By Moonflower
Cold
and Apathetic
maybe...
this is his
perception
of our world.
a twisted mutant of
what
used to be so
beautiful...
it stands in an awkward
stance..
ready for action..
or maybe its just there
to remind us of
our selves.
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Copyright 2009 Moonflower
Published on Wednesday, October 14, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "misconceptions"
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A former member wrote:
Wow... I really liked this piece.. As if the dark is there to remind us of a light still shining in the distance. Thank you for your poem.
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A former member wrote:
an interesting turnaround in the impression of who we are what we leave behind.. this presents many ideas in just a few words, philosophically divine..
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On Friday, October 16, 2009, Aleas
(169)
wrote:
Staggering.. I like the thought of the twisted mutant not being personified, how the face stays the same; same smile, same laugh, but the inside is what has deviated. And still with the same physical features, we can all see the difference. Neat!
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On Thursday, October 15, 2009, Sketso
(416) wrote:
a mirror that follows us into dark places... touche!
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On Friday, October 16, 2009, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
thank you for reading. ;)
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On Friday, October 16, 2009, Sketso
(416) wrote:
can't help but to re-read with a wondering of who the "his" applies to. divine, or mortal?
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On Wednesday, October 14, 2009, D3ADT0WN
(185) wrote:
The last three stanzas made me shit my pants. Awesome write.
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