Comments by Sketso
- "beautiful set up, tease and success, closed out with an "if..." You tell of the world that lives within a momentary glance so well."
Posted by Sketso on "Anticipation" by Lylani
- "isn't that a bitch? No matter how hard you try... there they are, behind closed eyes. *sigh*"
Posted by Sketso on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "good god, how cliche to say "get out of my head, stop living my life". I'm in awe, just from how amazingly I fit into this write by relation alone. And that ending line, to finish it off... Ivy covering a tree, as if embracing, but rather just climbing, suffocating, killing as it seeks to absorb all that is light for itself..."
Posted by Sketso on "I Stood by You" by Lylani
- "I can imagine myself parked on a bench, warming my hands by this "fire that makes me alive"... can't say I'd be in a suit, but... :) Amazing write that put me there with you, walking to the same beat."
Posted by Sketso on "Walking by the Thames" by Lylani
- "holy... . . . it feels so inadequate to say I relate hugely to this piece, down to the depths of what I used to be. I'm struggling to find myself again, and to not apologize for doing so, and this one... yeah. an explosion of regret is hidden in these words."
Posted by Sketso on "Empty" by Lylani
- "...and as often as I come back to read this, I should fave it, right? So there, I did, it's done."
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "yeah, still... ya know? Reading this almost makes me feel guilty, as if I were the "he" in the shadows. Exquisite telling of a tearful tale."
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "scathing finality, but I can't help but saying... good for you! then... I can't help but notice that we seem to write in similar cycles. HA! is that a good or bad thing?"
Posted by Sketso on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "Ya know, I remember the day I 1st read this... still hurts. Kudos to you for writing a poem that sticks!"
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "...and should you cut it out completely, stitching it over... the 'phantom pain' is nearly enough to destroy."
Posted by Sketso on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "I counter with the fact that an open wound is treatable, and will heal faster with the application of a soothing balm. The internal hurt, however, though maybe lesser, lasts longer, destroying rest/peace/comfort in such a way as to be continuously maddening. Those flinches from that inside hitch... confuses people, so they do not try to understand."
Posted by Sketso on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "won't let it... sucks to be on the other side of that, wondering why "she" won't let it. painfully poignant."
Posted by Sketso on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "Holy $#@! - if this isn't written perfection of exactly where I am, then I'm a mangy mongoose! Reading this... I'm almost tempted to say 'staythehellouttamyhead!' - "to fall apart together again" - permission to show this, some day, to explain?"
Posted by Sketso on "Falling apart, together" by Lylani
- "...or, at least, pretending that I pretend, when really, I'm the one who breaks when she walks away."
Posted by Sketso on "Role play" by Lylani
- "... I think I know her ... and I definitely live this ... silly little thing, but it slapped me in the face, making/breaking me as I realize I'm just... a pretender."
Posted by Sketso on "Role play" by Lylani
- "... ow ... I can envision the hurt, the ache, the longing... and the sacrifice... good GOD, but that was an intense personal glimpse of tears. I started getting the inkling of oops with the "I will be", then the ending slammed home... torment. What an entry into the world of DP."
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
