Comments by All Members
- "The second stanza made me laugh heartily. That _is_ always the line, isn't it? I love exploring the nature of casual relationships... Observing some of the nuances, while still protecting most of the mystique. This piece did that well. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Noone really wants to know" by Dejected_Worth
- "Interesting; very deep thinking. Reminds me of when a mob of people cut off Angel's wings in X-Factor (the comic book) about1985 or'86. That, as well, was very tragic, in that it appeared that he committed suicide...but that's neither here nor there; 10"
Posted by megaprime81 on "Angels and individuals" by Dejected_Worth
- "As long as she's a 7th grade teacher & not a 7th grader, hey, it's all good. When I was in grade school, all teachers were ugly old dick-melting dumpster fires (with the lone exception of double D Miss Pretrone, she taught math, which is perhaps one reason I couldn't learn it...I was too busy playing with myself...y'know, gettin' in touch with my feelings & all that jazz). There is definitely a hotness factor to teachers, though. I prefer college-level profs, myself, but then, I rarely meet grade-school teachers. Lucky kids. Sounds like a fun time. Well-written tale. I enjoyed it."
Posted by Unknown on "Sleeping with 7th Grade English Teachers..." by Dejected_Worth
- "love it! the second part made me feel like my inner child was waiting for me at the bottom of a bottle..."A new-Found reborn repertoire of amazing grace in the key of some sad sin..." ain't life grand?"
Posted by Unknown on "Nothing at all" by Dejected_Worth
- "love your way man,...you have a talent of combining quality lines with reality days,..relateable/accesible..undeniable truths that seep from our most real hours,... sweet nectar of truthes,..you just keep delivering,...gotta fav ya,...cheers man."
Posted by Unknown on "Nothing at all" by Dejected_Worth
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