Comments by All Members
- "i will come back to this over and over again. transcendental.. there is an awareness, a folding and blending of the senses and dimensions. it's like your words have eyes... and i am thoroughly scorched. thank you, gentlemen. this is breathtaking."
Posted by Unknown on "by horoscope or telescope (feat. the Id)" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Exactly. this is an enjoyable post, even for those who can't get past the stigmas and stereotypes attached to pro's and junkies...bombshells of pain painted with a big beautiful smile; perfect way to put it."
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on ""Krissy"" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Damn...you may act like an egotistical asshole on here(I have been accused of the same) but man, I gotta give props, respect where it's earned-this is very well-written..."she's getting sick; hurry on back, just make it quick..." My interpretation, of course, is withdrawals and trying to help a friend get through them... Such a nonchalant poetic feel in this. Not one to repeat what others have said, but the flow here has an almost musical feel to it, executed in a way that isn't forced or overbearing. You expressed some sharp skills here, and your theme is a relatable one. Exceptional post, nothing else to say.
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on ""Krissy"" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Oh man, the last two lines are the heart attack you're waiting on through the rest of the piece. It's like witty food porn. Let's discuss this shit over dinner."
Posted by Amaryllis on "comfort food" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "The title caught my eye because it happens to be my name but this is not what I was expecting. Absolutely fantastic! "
Posted by Unknown on ""Krissy"" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "I felt every line and stroke of this. Having been somewhere similar... I don't want to know this pain. "
Posted by Unknown on "stumble" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "I can always appreciate the significance of typography. Having been a graphic designer for a few years and worked with various type faces, this poem is a pleasant surprise. Much enjoyed!"
Posted by GhettoZombie on "that language" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Luckily her comment was here, or else I wouldn't understand shit... But I get it now... There are still many webs left yet to weave."
Posted by Unknown on "that language" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Where the love began, in the words, so little barriers and seeing everything was so easy-all the effeminate tails and flicks on each letter in every word that brought lives closer and closer and then in the end, where words broke apart and suddenly you don't speak the same language anymore and you don't even know if that person wants to read you anymore. You're still writing, though. That's important."
Posted by Amaryllis on "that language" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "i'm faving this in spirit because i got downgraded... remember how we talked about poetic evolution? well... you are now superhuman."
Posted by Unknown on "that language" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "the first time i read this, it felt like it was about the way others speak. twangs and regional thangs. loving the way another person presents their self verbally. but i suppose we communicate in all sorts of ways. and change. you are unparalleled. "
Posted by dramamine on "that language" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "never thought of it that way. I suppose on some level you do have to love the language to love o write in it. *head tilt*"
Posted by Vulture on "that language" by King_Crazy_Dave
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