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"Appreciate it trop, youve always been one of my faves"
Posted by Dejected_Worth on "My last day in Iraq" by Dejected_Worth

"I espicially liked this one in its past tense Nice work, thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "To Her: wherever, whoever she may have been" by Dejected_Worth

"Hm....I do believe this one is my favorite. Just a thought..."
Posted by WillowGreybird on "Cheap Cigars (the perfect cut)" by Dejected_Worth

"Poisons lay bitter on my liar's tongue....beautifully worded. My favorite line by far, so much emotion in so few words. Lovely."
Posted by WillowGreybird on "Stealing Sara [December ten years ago]" by Dejected_Worth

"This is a great piece fresh and telling. excellent write, sounds like the neighborhood were I grew up"
Posted by Unknown on "Discounted hookers [inflated ego * depressed economy]" by Dejected_Worth

"Thanks for being so nice, and yes I typically resign my self to accept my torn heart as a punishment for so many transgressions... but it has been one hell of a ride :p"
Posted by Dejected_Worth on "Cheating during hurricanes (Mary's little sister)" by Dejected_Worth

"Holy cow, this was awesome! : ) I loved the lines "meeting God In the same bar, that your father hid from your mother on the hardest days...", just one of many great lines in this short piece. "No one ever wasted roses on a hooker"... : ) That conversation is a great way to end this piece. Fantastic! Ciao, T/S "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Discounted hookers [inflated ego * depressed economy]" by Dejected_Worth

"A very interesting write.. I like that dialogue at the end, it sets you thinking..thinking about what is said in the first stanza.. cleverly written, nice use of words"
Posted by Unknown on "Discounted hookers [inflated ego * depressed economy]" by Dejected_Worth

"I read this poem twice. I can relate a lot to it. You have the unique ability to express your thoughts as they enter into your head perfectly on paper. Your words live. "
Posted by Unknown on "Stealing Sara [December ten years ago]" by Dejected_Worth

"very enjoyable, reading. nice piece!"
Posted by Unknown on "Flightless birds" by Dejected_Worth

"Some body's got wicked talent, you have crushed this piece, dude! Bravo! a masterwork!"
Posted by Unknown on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

"Trying to hide a much blacker meaning in a...how shall i say it...utmost colourful, red-pink venue, scented with booze and love (but who am i to say such a thing, i cant even smell in the first place ahah..) it is a bittersweet concept, of a lusty, but much more abyssal meaning. A light, but also dark read to me which i -did- enjoy. "
Posted by Unknown on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

"Breathtakingly heartbreaking. I cannot say more... Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

"the broken up stanzas make a great sequence of suspense...but that's a view i hold "
Posted by heroineyes on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

""I hope these vodka covered kisses keep coming" She doesn't taste as sweet as I'd remembered But who am I to say [she's different] This .isn't. a "feel good" kind of movie it's the next to last page in the journal of a faded beauty... But Brandy never ages as well as whiskey. And I'm just a line of bathroom stall graffiti, Not the artist she's remembering But there's no need to question raw intensity And this time she won't hate me in the morning. Brandy spills, flowing through my eager fingers ..I hope these vodka covered kisses keep coming.."
Posted by heroineyes on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

"She melted in my lap, like .fermented. fruit [It was Junior Prom all over again] Long before the "morning after" pill When cheap motel rooms were first-time venues And abortion was a word "good girls" didn't use Back when Brandy was pretty, and smelt like poetry. Back before I had more to offer then balled up 20's And reminding her of [the first time] she said she loved me"
Posted by heroineyes on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

""I hope these vodka covered kisses keep coming" Her words ringing [in and out of context] The metronome clicking to .broken. heart(beats) She was always .more or less. A graceful dancer But the body glitter barely does her Blue eyes justice But from the cheers, I'd say the fellas love it Even if no one knows why Brandy does this."
Posted by heroineyes on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

"i say that because you use the styles well, but scitter-scatter... i would have enjoyed 4 different poems with one stanza better than 4 stanzas in one poem...i like to see/hear/experience the suspense/progression... "
Posted by heroineyes on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

"i really liked... but i feel you wanted to say more with less...which made me feel this was a tad wordy... too much good stuff in one venue... you don't buy a girl a diamond ring on the first date ... if that makes sense..."
Posted by heroineyes on "12:37 Brandy [spills all over me]" by Dejected_Worth

"There is a lot said in this piece. Good read, thank you. - cree"
Posted by Unknown on "[If you need me] I'll be the puddle outside your highrise" by Dejected_Worth

""And i'm feeling less and less The Superman you fell in love with" - yup, I can relate to that... Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Sundays in November (lyrics)" by Dejected_Worth

"second to last stanza really fucked me up dude. you got mad skillz."
Posted by hazydaisy on "Sundays in November (lyrics)" by Dejected_Worth

"wow love it. You are very talented."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Sundays in November (lyrics)" by Dejected_Worth

"Definitely a C/W instant classic, kinda Kris Kristofferson style maybe, very cool. Wonderfully writ with the sadness of old memories DW, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Sundays in November (lyrics)" by Dejected_Worth

"This poem is sad but sensuous....Its beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "To Her: wherever, whoever she may have been" by Dejected_Worth

"These lyrics are so insanely awesome. Why do I love the parts about Bobby and the cigarettes so much? It doesn't matter, loved the whole thing. Took me a while to figure out how to bookmark it, but I did. Thank you for sharing your art"
Posted by Unknown on "Sundays in November (lyrics)" by Dejected_Worth

"I read this at least 5 time in a row, the depth is so deep it has it's own gravitational pull, sucking me in. Thank you for sharing your art. "
Posted by Unknown on "[If you need me] I'll be the puddle outside your highrise" by Dejected_Worth

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