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- "Words speak volumes. This speaks beyond that. You write beautifully even though some are not so happy.
The one who broke such a creative heart is a jerk.
I know this is from years ago. Would love to see more of your writing. You have a very creative mind and a possibly amazing heart. :) good luck on your future. Whatever that may be.
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Posted by Unknown on "Tragedy" by Loneal
- "what art thou thinking?
from what I read you are sinking
An endless black hole your doorway
Looks as if you want to shrink away
From those that have battered
From the one that broke a faithful heart
Only time will heal what is shattered
Maybe it is time for a new start?
What you may need lurking in plain sight
What she wields sacred and powerful
What she asks simple and innocent
what she waits for is a futiue writing. "
Posted by Unknown on "Tragedy" by Loneal
- "It's so like the places and frames of mind i've been in. Very striking!!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Poet Death" by Loneal
- "If only love could soothe the seas...wow. if only you could feel the emotion I felt when I read this."
Posted by Unknown on "Only If Only" by Loneal
- "If only calm were waking seas
That feeling sails and thoughts make rough. what imagery! i really loved this poem"
Posted by darth ren on "Only If Only" by Loneal
- "If only... all words in this write are true. I loved this piece of truth. ~Silver~"
Posted by Unknown on "Only If Only" by Loneal
- "Much admiration for your scope of vision.. it takes people like each other to make a difference, however small. I really believe that."
Posted by Unknown on "The Ignorant" by Loneal
- "Ah, yes, the problem of democracy...the ignorant and uncaring masses. We have. I hope, reached the pinnacle. Represented by those we have bending the rules...my ignorance pains me, but the cure, still is painful to take at times...knowledge."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "The Ignorant" by Loneal
- "I am no longer traped, it was the key to the trap for me. This write can be an eye opener and an eye closer, for me atleast. Now I can appreciate it, and like it for trying to embrace the world. Tiger"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "The Ignorant" by Loneal
- ""Will you die now for this or live with guildt". I was traped as soon as I asked this. I started hating life, my own infact becouse the question take over everything. Now I ask "Will you live now for this or die with guildt" "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "The Ignorant" by Loneal
- "*sighs* Fear and doubt are, indeed, nasty little creatures to deal with...unfortunately, I'm dealing with both on a regular basis these days. Excellent portrayal of those feelings. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Bad little Things" by Loneal
- "Makes me think of the Native American Tale of the two wolves residing within.
One represents fear, the other hope. They start out scrawny and weak, and they fight each other. The one that gets fed the most, becomes the strongest and wins."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Bad little Things" by Loneal
- ""Leave Behind One, Truthless, Faithless, Just plain Less, Then Life's Joys Show us." Nicely Written. It shows that it was from the heart."
Posted by Unknown on "Bad little Things" by Loneal
- "ametrical fusion and sublime flow...heralds almost a new dawn feel....puchy, intelligen and intuitive...astounding poetry, brilliance personified..heck!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Enemies Unseen" by Loneal
- ""only, specifically, Ultimately...Just You." Your rhyme scheme is enough to sweep me off my feet...the imagery, just the icing to the cake. Excellently done, I could drown in your words. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Enemies Unseen" by Loneal
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