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First Desire, Last Depart
By Loneal
Scented spirituality
departed bliss
loving embraces
a life that I miss, this morn
Damages done
awoken from dream
to the harshness of life
while still you yet seem, with me
Such simpleness sought
recalling then
still warm and at peace
not knowing of when, 'twould fade
Knowing better now
cherished dreams make me hear
I can't help but wish secretly
that you were so near, and mine
This vision is all
I allow me to keep
your face will not fade
from my waking sleep, and heart.
--/Loneal aka Syn.Dark. 200438LMay05 (KU)/--
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Copyright 2005 Loneal
Comments on "First Desire, Last Depart"
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A former member wrote:
Very awesome... truer words have never touched the heart as this... Thank you for the honour of being able to read it.
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On Saturday, May 21, 2005, DarkDruidess
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wrote:
*sigh*...yes...
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A former member wrote:
first desire...passion; last depart...pain....i loved it...excellent write...
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On Friday, May 20, 2005, Leigh
(14) wrote:
Reading this takes me back...having felt the same way. Love it!
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A former member wrote:
I have tasted these flavors and smelled these scents upon awakening many times. Strange how the memories never seem to completely fade from our subconscious no matter how consciously we push them away. Very nicely written. ~Ship!
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