Tragedy
By Loneal
Raging a war against self-styled walls
Into barricades of stone built with endless self-doubt
Hurling attacks 'gainst this country of I
In the hopes of subduing emotions I sigh
"You'll never defeat me!" - defiant, the shout -
The jeering, a ruckus amidst the cat-calls
Battered and beaten fighting back fervently
Dissolving, enraged, I struggle inside
Parried and blocking each sword-stroke here fought
Pierced and cut through with each deadly-blow caught
"I'll never give in!" - so bitterly cursed -
While the life slowly drains from a heart coldly burst
Both parties so wounded, this equal match made
Both enemies dying; the Grim Reaper wields spade;
With breaths quickly fading, each reaches in peace
"Why didst thou attack?" "Why'd you seek this release?"
Fingertips brushing, this pair mirrored here:
I've slaughtered Myself o'er someone held dear.
~L/S.D. 20090826 1433L
Comments on "Tragedy"
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A former member wrote:
Words speak volumes. This speaks beyond that. You write beautifully even though some are not so happy.
The one who broke such a creative heart is a jerk.
I know this is from years ago. Would love to see more of your writing. You have a very creative mind and a possibly amazing heart. :) good luck on your future. Whatever that may be.
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A former member wrote:
what art thou thinking?
from what I read you are sinking
An endless black hole your doorway
Looks as if you want to shrink away
From those that have battered
From the one that broke a faithful heart
Only time will heal what is shattered
Maybe it is time for a new start?
What you may need lurking in plain sight
What she wields sacred and powerful
What she asks simple and innocent
what she waits for is a futiue writing.