Tragedy

By Loneal

Raging a war against self-styled walls
Into barricades of stone built with endless self-doubt
Hurling attacks 'gainst this country of I
In the hopes of subduing emotions I sigh
"You'll never defeat me!" - defiant, the shout -
The jeering, a ruckus amidst the cat-calls

Battered and beaten fighting back fervently
Dissolving, enraged, I struggle inside
Parried and blocking each sword-stroke here fought
Pierced and cut through with each deadly-blow caught
"I'll never give in!" - so bitterly cursed -
While the life slowly drains from a heart coldly burst

Both parties so wounded, this equal match made
Both enemies dying; the Grim Reaper wields spade;
With breaths quickly fading, each reaches in peace
"Why didst thou attack?" "Why'd you seek this release?"
Fingertips brushing, this pair mirrored here:
I've slaughtered Myself o'er someone held dear.

~L/S.D. 20090826 1433L

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© 2009 Loneal
Published on Wednesday, August 26, 2009.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Words speak volumes. This speaks beyond that. You write beautifully even though some are not so happy. The one who broke such a creative heart is a jerk. I know this is from years ago. Would love to see more of your writing. You have a very creative mind and a possibly amazing heart. :) good luck on your future. Whatever that may be.

  • A former member wrote: what art thou thinking? from what I read you are sinking An endless black hole your doorway Looks as if you want to shrink away From those that have battered From the one that broke a faithful heart Only time will heal what is shattered Maybe it is time for a new start? What you may need lurking in plain sight What she wields sacred and powerful What she asks simple and innocent what she waits for is a futiue writing.

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