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Bad little Things
By Loneal
Fear
is a vicious
{little}
thing
suddenly wrapping itself around the mind
suffocating it with false ideas
of doom and futile efforts
anticipated to leave one
powerless
pointless
just plain less
than reality shows us.
Doubt
is a nasty
{little}
thing
secretly digging tunnels 'neath confidence
undermining it with hidden caverns
of failing belief and dying dreams
that leave behind one
trustless
faithless
just plain less
than life's joys show us.
--/Loneal aka Syn.Dark. 102059LOct06 (KU)/--
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© 2006 Loneal
Published on Tuesday, October 10, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Bad little Things"
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A former member wrote:
This is written from inside. Greatly done.
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A former member wrote:
*sighs* Fear and doubt are, indeed, nasty little creatures to deal with...unfortunately, I'm dealing with both on a regular basis these days. Excellent portrayal of those feelings. ~*Beth*~
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On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(423)
wrote:
Makes me think of the Native American Tale of the two wolves residing within. One represents fear, the other hope. They start out scrawny and weak, and they fight each other. The one that gets fed the most, becomes the strongest and wins.
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A former member wrote:
"Leave Behind One, Truthless, Faithless, Just plain Less, Then Life's Joys Show us." Nicely Written. It shows that it was from the heart.
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On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
doubt is consuming...beautifully portrayed in this piece.
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