Comments by All Members
- ".."I told the
sky
not to dock
in your
shade
and it was
wrong to
do" Have I told you that you're brilliant? Thank you for this."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- "You have no idea how happy I am to see something new from you. You never disappoint.. Your wording stays original and full of depth. "
it was
the color
of a broke
tattoo" gah.. I'm in love with that line."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "european wood" by jaunty pill
- "there are few poems i enjoy that relate personal memories of places or tie in elements of a sensory-specific area, because they're sometimes hard to fully embrace if you've never been to the place described therein... this is one of those few that takes m"
Posted by doll on the rag on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- ".:completely amazaed:.i fully loved the creativeness of this, and the message---it all reads so damn wonderful, backward or forward...is htere a message in that? cause i see one."
Posted by AniDayz on "a faint smile so vivid blue" by jaunty pill
- "damnit i went through reading everything backward even after i had scrolled down and saw all that....i'm so retarded. but i loved it all the same. first thing i've read in days and i LOVE it."
Posted by sIo on "a faint smile so vivid blue" by jaunty pill
- "ahh, so very clever.... masterfully construed, beautiful rhythm, and the content.... just awesome. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "anything less" by jaunty pill
- "*tonight we
will stand upon
a golden rustic
mexico with
old weeds in
our fingers and
good-bye clouds
aging on us *....this is stellar..the whole piece..and the passage is just invoking..more please!"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- "initially it seemed fatalistic, but had a funny hopeful bent to it by the end. "whiskey olives.. old cedar bin" really stands out in terms or the sights and smells that it evokes. "
Posted by Unknown on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
- "very good stuff. the imagery is really aggressive without being so overwhelming as to become out of focus and blurred. i'm impressed."
Posted by Unknown on "of a thousand kings" by jaunty pill
- "
It's funny how you did my harder piece first. I am not sure why the simple direction in some of my poetry , Always gets the most interesting comments. I think the effiel tower is bigger than my cock though."
Posted by jaunty pill on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "
Blowing iron out my ass...I could have done that as well , But the prostitute really wasn't willing. Sadly. LOL. Thanks for your comment King. Most are afraid to get dirty. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "Whoa...I've been gone from here to long...I'm missing the brilliant little gems like this one. You've got my attention Jaunty...cheers!"
Posted by Chameleon on "anything less" by jaunty pill
- "shortly after his hands finally burn off and he has no more ability to even alter the iron, he takes a dump on it then smiles like he made the fuckign eiffel tower. "
Posted by Unknown on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "when i hear the word 'wordsmith' i think of a blacksmith making things. over the course of this poem the blacksmith i picture swallows his hammer, blows it out his ass, and pounds away at molten iron with his fists"
Posted by Unknown on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "But, seriously, stop gloating. Humility is one of the most impressive human characteristics. Thank us for reading and shut the hell up; it's not your place to educate, only to present."
Posted by Liz on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "That was my reaction as well. I want to punch the poet for thinking these things and I want to punch him again for talking incessantly about himself afterwards. And then I might concede that it was skillfully written."
Posted by Liz on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "well it seems that everyone has already told you, you are brilliant and that this piece is amazing and since i refuse to be redundant, i will just say nicely done ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "anything less" by jaunty pill
- "there are so many pretty lines my mind is stuck in this euphoric state of bliss...i really like your style, you are indeed a must read ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
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