Comments by All Members
- "you have an original and hard-hitting style. It is very powerful... this is the second work of yours I've read, and I'll be going back for more. Bravo."
Posted by flying_fox on "Cold sprawl" by Dr Benway
- "oh my... this is so beautiful and so sad. I think the lines " Looking down on spoiled veins wrapped in broken skin,
all held together with safety pins and dollar store nail polish" "
Posted by flying_fox on "It's your birhday today" by Dr Benway
- "it's amazing how the authenticity of a palpable friend can mean the difference between a pleasurable now and a sorrowful then~elisa"
Posted by elisa on "It's your birhday today" by Dr Benway
- "YOu sure dont need my help, from that mail I got from you tonight, It sounds like you are doing a pretty damn good job of chipping away at yourself..."
Posted by Dr Benway on "Cold sprawl" by Dr Benway
- "fuck man. Talk about hitting where i am on the head. This chips away at me in ways that not many things can..."
Posted by Six-Out on "Cold sprawl" by Dr Benway
- "Like ash dreams in a strong wind. I feel this. Particularly the first stanza. Seeing the decline before it happens, I guess. We're all nothingness, in a way. It just hurts so much when we realize it."
Posted by Six-Out on "Lost and found, and lost" by Dr Benway
- "this is so well worded, it made me curious. it doesnt really reveal too much but it means that you can translate it into your own thoughts"
Posted by Anth on "The ten hour itch." by Dr Benway
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