Comments by All Members
- "...keep having those conversations.
Adroit with the quill..."
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- ""Funny how the empty walls feel wiser when you're gone." How melancholic and tragic, how sheer and ghostly unforgiving. There is too much here to say about my past, too much about anyone who could relate, so I will comment on the structure of the poem. It has great backbone and body. It is flitting and nightly, but there is purity here in the strength of words, memories, emotions re-lived. Re-loved. Deadly beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
- "This piece crashes like the ocean itself. Flawless."
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "You earned your win K. but i appreciate the kudos. write on!"
Posted by Dei on "Pearl's Encore. " by Dei
- "im really glad you liked it! It felt good tapping into that moment again. "
Posted by Dei on "Pearl's Encore. " by Dei
- "I just wanted to say how much I absolutely adore this. You perfectly captured the unification of artist's soul and means of expression. This- this is how I feel when I drum (perhaps badly, also, ;) but I don't care...it feels good)."
Posted by thyyic on "Pearl's Encore. " by Dei
- "I like the way the stanzas rolled like the waves.. each one washing across the soul as the images are interpreted.. beautifully penned indeed m'lady Dei"
Posted by Skye on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "ohh wow... "and the ways you failed to find me beautiful" that line touched me deeply, goood ending to... fuck it, nothing i can say will do it justice..."
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "I love your comments Natalie! Glad you enjoyed. :)"
Posted by Dei on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "this is the cry of so many women, and the voice you gave it was that of an angel. the imagery while gorgeous, suffered its own heartache. beautifully penned! this made me ache."
Posted by natalie on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "I don't know why we sometimes batter ourselves senseless on unforgiving shores...everquesting for a safe harbour...I got the sense of you perhaps striving to be something other than your nature when faced with one who doesn't appreciate your true essence... I love how you have framed these thoughts within such picturesque natural imagery , most effective for me ...thank you"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "made me think of my own future, and my one dreams along the way, will i ever get there? will i ever been happy doing it? will i be miserable? i would never know, until it happens, but yes this is breathtakingly beautiful, miss natelle. this deserves a 10/10 from me, thanks :) "
Posted by Star on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "that is truly beautiful... reminds me of someone I know."
Posted by Unknown on "Pen. " by Dei
- "..the intent of 1 is to accept, the intent of the other is to give. there is harmony in the hope that 1 will absorb everything of the other..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Pen. " by Dei
- "the coat.... I mean, sure the whole is such an appropriate extension of the inspiration... but the coat... that smell of the father, how many ways to make that mean, was he protector or molester... how the words cover the page.. with guilt or with care... or both, the beauty of the figure, those aching shoulders, so much weight in this world. ... and the emptiness, without your emptiness.... that rings so clearly to me... where the vase is only able to receive if it's empty, and yet... what does that make the pen, if it relies on emptiness to be useful. Very thoughtfully wrought... with care and craft. *bows*"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Pen. " by Dei
- "i loved this... 'tis any thing but "crappy" well done... "
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Pen. " by Dei
- "beautifully written, natelle... love the story of behind this... (: "
Posted by Star on "Pen. " by Dei
- "that's rather brilliantly crafted ... I didn't expect the comedown ... for some reason that Pretenders song came into my head...can't recall the name right now , but the lines..." we are all of us in the gutter , but some of us are looking at the stars " ... thank you"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "...you approach her fearfully, as if you'll never be good enough, but determined to beat her until she speaks by your design..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Pearl's Encore. " by Dei
- "This reminded me of the drum circles I used to attend, my drum was made from a mares skin... Lovely, good luck - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Pearl's Encore. " by Dei
- "Thats beautiful, like you said that for years you played the drums badly but in your heart and mind you're a pro and again great poem"
Posted by Unknown on "Pearl's Encore. " by Dei
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