Comments by All Members
- "I love how they connected and I agree with the other comments that the first and second stood out!"
Posted by natalie on "Char. -Haiku" by Dei
- "Beautifully mesmerizing.. With an ache to belong. Erotic in so subtle a way that it demands to be reread."
Posted by natalie on "An Effort At Prose" by Dei
- "Another awesome gem! Its almost like watching a spider work her spinet skilfully till the silken threads sparkle enough to capture the fly/insect... Delicate, captivating, sad, brutal! "
Posted by natalie on "Some Sort of Lovely (revised)" by Dei
- "And although a bit late in tgw doing; congrats on POD!"
Posted by natalie on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "I love how your pieces come together embracing the nature that is us....and they end so dramatically, crashing upon the rocks of their destinies..beautiful as always!"
Posted by natalie on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "This was fabulous! This perfectly describes all that we are, and our need to despite of it all, be wanted, awed, and loved. I'm a fan!"
Posted by natalie on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "it's so raw. Straight to the heart. i can feel it literally pouring out of a gaping hole in the heart. so so love it."
Posted by Humanfly on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
- "your work is borne of oceans of truth distilled. I am humbled for the opportunity to read it. "
Posted by Adagios on "Sunflower Rd" by Dei
- "This is one of the most imperfectly perfect writing I’ve every stumbled upon. I can hear the leaf whispered words complete with pauses. I’m awed. "
Posted by Adagios on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
- "i like the sound of that. The tides have certainly changed a great deal in the time since this posted"
Posted by Dei on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "You seem fond of your own sense of love unrequited. I don't blame you, since it serves you so well. "
Posted by the Id on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "It's interesting, the way you write as if to someone specific but in ways that make others feel as though it could be for them. Even though some of these images are presented as almost memories, by the end i was almost convinced they were my own. "
Posted by the Id on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "Whew! I just completed the 3-part journey that is your "Sea-ries." I am definitely an enthusiast of seafaring adventures and I find your troika of sentimental poems to be quite seaworthy. Perhaps you can be convinced to author a Sea-quel?"
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "Had to log in after seeing this get Poem Of The Day...Bloody well deserved..Superb piece :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "that last stanza is utterly flawless. well done and congrats on potd. i probably wouldn't have come upon this piece otherwise."
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "right from the beginning to the end..it kept me completely occupied..i loved the theme..n the way you described it..u now have a new fan..thanks for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Foam" by Dei
- "sometimes some things in life leaves us shattered..as we expected a lot from those things..n when it vanished..we have nothing to look forward..its a beautiful description of such an event..thanks for sharing n take care.."
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "some storms are so inspiring so beautiful that one can only just stand and be entranced by its nature... this is one such storm."
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "As beautiful and deadly as the poet that wrote it, I love the windwaterfirecrushfuck line."
Posted by Alchemist on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "stormy seas you've whipped up here Dei... the landscape needs the arms of a Titan or a ladyscape to soothe... wild ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "...who can harness a hurricane like this? there is so much energy under the calm title..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Sea Breeze" by Dei
- "The last sentence is a fist in the side with teeth~to~dust and glass ribs. May these waves find sand where whiskey is replaced by the clear of their own design. There are shores more suited, who see through the seasalt~foam into the core. No matter."
Posted by Unknown on "Sea Foam" by Dei
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